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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison v.4

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.
The provided bar graph depicts the percentages of Britisher, who can identify to the image of the four different persons ( Queen, Prime Minister, Chancellor and Mayor of London) with the different four ages. In summary, the highest percentages of people recognise to the different ages photos of the Queen compares to the other three people. As to the bar chart, almost 100% of people easily identify to the Queen' s all ages of photos. As opposed to this, only 20% of people recognise to the Mayor of London' s image (when their age is until 20), while, 40% of people identify when their age is above 60 year; furthermore, sixty percentages of people determine to the picture of the London' s mayor and their age is between 20 and 60. According to the graph, 20% and 30% of people identify to the Chancellor' s photos when their age is 0-20 and 21-40 respectively; whereas, 70% of people determine the image of their age is above 40 year. In the image of the Prime Minister, people are recognise 50%, 80%, 90% and nearly 60% to their age is 0-20, 21-40, 41-60 and above 60 year respectively.
The provided bar graph depicts the percentages of Britisher, who can
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Queen, Prime Minister, Chancellor and Mayor of London) with the
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four ages.

In summary, the highest percentages of
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people
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recognise
to the
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different
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ages
photos of the Queen compares to the other three
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people
.

As to the bar chart, almost 100% of
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people
easily
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identify
to the
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ages
of photos. As opposed to this,
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20% of
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recognise
to the Mayor of
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London&
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image
(when their
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age
is until 20), while, 40% of
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people
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identify
when their
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age
is above 60 year;
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determine to the picture of the
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age
is between 20 and 60.

According to the graph, 20% and 30% of
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people
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to the
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Chancellor&
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age
is 0-20 and 21-40
respectively
; whereas, 70% of
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people
determine the
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image
of their
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age
is above 40 year. In the
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of the Prime Minister,
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50%, 80%, 90% and
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is 0-20, 21-40, 41-60 and above 60 year
respectively
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1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS academic Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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