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Summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage TPO2 writing task 1 v.2

Summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage TPO2 writing task 1 v. 2
The author claimed that group working on projects are more beneficial for the organizations by describing some of them. However, the professor gave some examples to express the disadvantages and challenges of team working as following. Firstly, the professor refused the involvement of all group members in most of the projects. He told that some of the members may give themselves free right and do not contribute to the project. Secondly, the professor believed that even though only few group members are responsible and accomplishes the project tasks, but the result and profits of the project goes to all of the group members and no one will be aware of their names. Finally, as the authors opinion, group members take the best decisions by negotiation and consulting with each other. Although, the professor disclaims this idea. He said the creative ideas and solutions can be rejected by some group members. Therefore, they may be convinced with wrong and inappropriate decisions. Thus, the project will not be successful.
The author claimed that
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group
working on
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projects
are more beneficial for the organizations by describing
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some
of them.
However
, the
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professor
gave
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some
examples to express the disadvantages and challenges of team working as following.

Firstly
, the
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professor
refused the involvement of all
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group
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members
in most of the
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projects
. He
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told
that
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some of the
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members
may give themselves free right and do not contribute to the project.

Secondly
, the
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professor
believed that
even though
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only
few
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group
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members
are responsible and accomplishes the
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project
tasks,
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but
the result and profits of the
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project
goes to
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all of the
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group
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members
and no one will be aware of their names.

Finally
, as the
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authors
opinion,
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group
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members
take the best decisions by negotiation and consulting with each other.
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Although
, the
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professor
disclaims this
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idea
. He said the creative
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ideas
and solutions can
be rejected
by
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some
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group
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members
.
Therefore
, they may
be convinced
with
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wrong
and inappropriate decisions.
Thus
, the
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project
will not be successful.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic Summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage TPO2 writing task 1 v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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