Some People Believe That Competitive Sports, Both Team and Individual, Have No Place in the School Curriculum. How Far Do You Agree or Disagree? Give Reason for Your Answer and Include Any Relevant Examples from Your Own Knowledge or Experience. v.7
Some People Believe That Competitive Sports, Both Team and Individual, Have No Place in the School Curriculum. How Far Give Reason for Your Answer and Include Any Relevant Examples from Your Own Knowledge or Experience. v. 7
It is believed that competitive sports, either team or individual have negative effects at school. In my opinion I disagree with this statement, because goals of education are to prepare competitive people for the society. Moreover, competitive sports help learners to be motivated and encouraged not to give up in extreme situations in real-life.
In the school curriculum, competitive sports should be included. If it is team sport, it helps learners to collaborate with each other, be responsible as a member of the team. Such skills are very important in preparing learners for the future. Take for example, football or basketball, students need to decide each step they do while playing and try to win together. The same skill could have a great benefit when they become workers. If it’s an individual sport, it could help a learner to make a decision by himself how to be a unique and show his talents much better among other participants in order to win. As a result, competitive sports lead to improve important real – life skills as collaboration, leadership, making a decision and being responsible which aren’t taught in other subjects.
The second reason of including it into school curriculum is a motivation. Evidently, at school teachers are to motivate learners to do well, however, we should teach learners to motivate by themselves from early ages. Therefore, competitive sports play a great role in order to motivate learners intrinsically. Take for example an individual sport swimming, a learner has to be disciplined and do his trainings regularly. Furthermore, he is taught to analyze his behavior during swimming, to organize and have plan” B” his steps in advance. Additionally, the main important thing he is regularly told not to give up even if in the case of losing the competition. These soft skills are much more valued in real -life than any other skills.
To conclude, competitive sports should have place in the school curriculum. They could help the education system prepare competitive learners for the future by teaching them important soft skills, such as working collaboratively in a team and hold a motivation, which are necessary for them in real-life.
It
is believed
that
competitive
sports
, either
team
or individual have
negative
effects at
school
. In my opinion I disagree with this statement,
because
goals of education are to prepare
competitive
people
for the society.
Moreover
,
competitive
sports
help
learners
to
be motivated
and encouraged not to give up in extreme situations in real-life.
In the
school
curriculum,
competitive
sports
should
be included
. If it is
team
sport
, it
helps
learners
to collaborate with each
other
, be responsible as a member of the
team
. Such
skills
are
very
important
in preparing
learners
for the future. Take
for example
, football or basketball, students need to decide each step they do while playing and try to win together. The same
skill
could have a great benefit when they become workers. If it’s an individual
sport
, it could
help
a
learner
to
make
a decision by himself how to be a unique and
show
his talents much better among
other
participants in order to win.
As a result
,
competitive
sports
lead to
improve
important
real
–
life
skills
as collaboration, leadership, making a decision and being responsible which aren’t taught in
other
subjects.
The second reason of including it into
school
curriculum is a motivation.
Evidently
, at
school
teachers are to motivate
learners
to do well,
however
, we should teach
learners
to motivate by themselves from early ages.
Therefore
,
competitive
sports
play a great role in order to motivate
learners
intrinsically
. Take
for example
an individual
sport
swimming, a
learner
has to
be disciplined
and do his trainings
regularly
.
Furthermore
, he
is taught
to analyze his behavior during swimming, to organize and have plan” B” his steps in advance.
Additionally
, the main
important
thing he is
regularly
told
not to give up even if in the case of losing the competition. These soft
skills
are much more valued in real -life than any
other
skills
.
To conclude
,
competitive
sports
should have place in the
school
curriculum. They could
help
the education system prepare
competitive
learners
for the future by teaching them
important
soft
skills
, such as working
collaboratively
in a
team
and hold a motivation, which are necessary for them in real-life.
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52Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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