The bar chart provides information about the quantity of males and females employed in various types of jobs in Australia in 2003. It is evident that the number of employed people by job type varied significantly between men and women. Clerical work had the most employees of all types.
For men, the highest figures were for tradepersons and clerical work, with almost 900000 people each type. There was 650000 men employed as professionals, which is closely followed by managers (about 610000 people). Further down the list was semi professionals and production sector with around 500000 employees. Labourers had attracted the least number of
male workers with only 400000 people.
For women, the trend was nearly similar with that of men, with most females being employed as clerks (about 950000 people), 50000 more than that of men. Having the second highest number of employees was professionals with 700000 people. This was followed in turn by semi professionals and managers ( 380000 and 200000 people respectively). The least number of females working as tradepersons and in production sector with 100000 each.
The bar chart provides information about the quantity of males and females
employed
in various types of jobs in Australia in 2003. It is evident that the
number
of
employed
people
by job type varied
significantly
between
men
and women. Clerical work had the most employees of all types.
For
men
, the highest figures were for
tradepersons
and clerical work, with almost 900000
people
each type. There was 650000
men
employed
as
professionals
, which is
closely
followed by managers (about 610000
people)
.
Further
down the list was semi
professionals
and production sector with around 500000 employees.
Labourers
had attracted the least
number
of
male
workers with
only
400000
people
.
For women, the trend was
nearly
similar with that of
men
, with most females being
employed
as clerks (about 950000
people)
, 50000 more than that of
men
. Having the second highest
number
of employees was
professionals
with 700000
people
. This
was followed
in turn by semi
professionals
and managers
(
380000 and 200000
people
respectively
). The least
number
of females working as
tradepersons
and in production sector with 100000 each.
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