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WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an v.4

WRITING TASK 1 The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006.
The graph chart shows the consumption quantity of potatoes, pasta and rice in a European state during the period of 30 years from 1976 to 2006. Overall, it is seen that the proportion of potatoes in a weekly diet has greatly reduced in the span of 30 years whereas intake of pasta has substantially increased during the same time period. In 1976, the consumption of potatoes stood at the highest among the three food items. More than 400 grams of potatoes were consumed by a person in a week. Pasta was the least eaten product in that year (About 270 grams per person per week). Initially until around 1986, potatoes were the most sought after food products. However, this trend got reversed and people started eating less amounts of potatoes thereafter. Especially after 1991, there was a steep decline of quantity of potatoes forming part of diet and in 2006; it was at the bottom position (little more than 100 grams per person per week). In contrast to this trend, people started consuming more quantity of pasta and its quantity on weekly meals continued to increase until 1996 (reaching 500 grams per human per week) and thereafter, it has stabilised. It can also be seen that the consumption of rice was declining until 2000 and thereafter it slightly peaked up. However, its consumption in 2006 (around 200 grams per person per week) was much less than in 1976 (little more than 300 grams per person per week).
The graph chart
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shows
the
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consumption
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quantity
of
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potatoes
,
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pasta
and rice in a European state during the period of 30 years from 1976 to 2006.
Overall
, it is
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seen
that the proportion of
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potatoes
in a weekly diet has
greatly
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reduced
in the span of 30 years whereas intake of
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pasta
has
substantially
increased during the same time period.

In 1976, the
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consumption
of
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potatoes
stood at the highest among the three food items. More than 400
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grams
of
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potatoes
were consumed
by a
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person
in a
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week
.
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Pasta
was the least eaten product in that year (About 270
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grams
per
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person
per week).

Initially
until around 1986,
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potatoes
were the most sought after food products.
However
, this trend
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got
reversed and
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people
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started
eating
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less
amounts of
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potatoes
thereafter.
Especially
after 1991, there was a steep decline of
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quantity
of
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potatoes
forming part of diet and in 2006; it was at the bottom position (
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little
more than 100
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grams
per
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person
per week).

In contrast
to this trend,
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people
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started
consuming more
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quantity
of
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pasta
and its
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quantity
on weekly meals continued to increase until 1996 (reaching 500
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grams
per human per
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week)
and thereafter, it has
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stabilised
.

It can
also
be
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seen
that the
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consumption
of rice was declining until 2000 and thereafter it
slightly
peaked up.
However
, its
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consumption
in 2006 (around 200
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grams
per
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person
per
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week)
was much less than in 1976 (
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little
more than 300
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grams
per
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person
per
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week)
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic WRITING TASK 1 The graph below shows the amount in grams of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country between 1976 and 2006.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
247 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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