The given line graph compares the hours of non-paid jobs done by male and female with different numbers of children in an average week. As is observed from the graphs, women worked significantly more hours than men for the household works like child caring, gardening etc. Also, the number of hourly works done as unpaid works got higher with the increase of child number.
As is presented in the line graph, married women work around 30 hours per week for household unpaid works while the men from the same category work for only 18 hours. The works done by females with 1-2 children per week is more than 50 hours and with 3 plus children, the work done by females is 60 hours. Interestingly, the volume of unpaid jobs done by males does not change with the number of offsprings they have except for the men with more than three kids who works even less unpaid household works.
In conclusion, we can say that the volume of unpaid works like household works and child caring increases for women with the increase of their children's number but for men, this remains the same. And female works significantly more hours for that type of household works than the men do.
The
given
line graph compares the
hours
of non-paid jobs done by male and
female
with
different
numbers
of children in an average week. As
is observed
from the graphs, women worked
significantly
more
hours
than
men
for the
household
works like child caring, gardening etc.
Also
, the
number
of hourly works done as unpaid works
got
higher with the increase of child number.
As
is presented
in the line graph, married women
work
around 30
hours
per week for
household
unpaid works while the
men
from the same category
work
for
only
18
hours
. The works done by
females
with 1-2 children per week is more than 50
hours
and with 3 plus children, the
work
done by
females
is 60
hours
.
Interestingly
, the volume of unpaid jobs done by males does not
change
with the
number
of
offsprings
they have
except for
the
men
with more than three kids who
works
even less unpaid
household
works.
In conclusion
, we can say that the volume of unpaid works like
household
works and child caring increases for women with the increase of their children's
number
but
for
men
, this remains the same. And
female
works
significantly
more
hours
for that type of
household
works than the
men
do.
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