Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In recent years, more people are choosing to read e-book rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v.2

In recent years, more people are choosing to read e-book rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 2
These days the modern people preferences over internet books are increasing than the printed book. In my opinion, there are more benefits over the drawbacks. The e-books are portable and reliable as the major advantages, whereas the written copy is costly and limited as the significant drawback. Firstly, electronic books are easy to carry and faster to reach, so it is advantageous. We can carry them on phone, tablet, and laptop, even we can study while traveling. These books are easily available on the internet and buy them within a second by using debit/credit cards. Location doesn' t matter while buying books copies are available to view throughout the globe. The Amazon is the popular store for items, so books over them are too easy to buy. An electronic data are highly backed-up so that we can get it available anytime we want and they don' t get destroyed like papers. Though paper books are costly and limited in number, so it takes a lot of time to print and available to the readers. Distribution of the piece is too hard.
These days the modern
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
preferences over internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are increasing than the printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. In my opinion, there are more benefits over the drawbacks.

The e-books are portable and reliable as the major advantages, whereas the written copy is costly and limited as the significant drawback.

Firstly
, electronic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are easy to carry and faster to reach,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it is advantageous. We can carry them on phone, tablet, and laptop, even we can study while traveling. These
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are
easily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
on the internet and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
them within a second by using debit/credit cards. Location
Possible spelling mistake found.
doesn&
#039; t matter while buying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
copies are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
to view throughout the globe.

The Amazon is the popular store for items,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
over them are too easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
. An electronic data are
highly
backed-up
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
anytime we
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
want and
they
Possible spelling mistake found.
don&
#039; t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
like papers. Though paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are costly and limited in number,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it takes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
time to print and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
to the readers. Distribution of the piece is too
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
A new language is a new life.
Persian Proverb

IELTS academic In recent years, more people are choosing to read e-book rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts