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The chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in the last 3 years, between 3 to 5 years or not within the last 5 years v.2

The chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in the last 3 years, between 3 to 5 years or not within the last 5 years v. 2
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who have changed address within 5 years, within 3 years or remained in the same house for at least 5 years. Overall, it is obvious that there are wide variations in the percentage of people who moved house during certain ages. As can be seen from the chart that despite a few minor differences, those in their twenties and thirties have similar statistics. The proportion of people moving house from 3 to 5 years ago is the highest and the lowest figure is for having not moved in the last 5 years. There are 55 percent of people aged between 40 and 49, which have moved house within 5 years and only 14 percent of people living the same house. By contrast in the next age group, the percentage of people who haved changed address over 3 years ago and those who have remained the same house in the last 5 years are almost the same, at 41 percent and 42 percent respectively, whereas only 17 percent of people having moved within 3 years.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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address within 5 years, within 3 years or remained in the same
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for at least 5 years.
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people
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during certain ages.

As can be
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seen
from the chart that despite a few minor differences, those in their twenties and thirties have similar statistics. The proportion of
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people
moving
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house
from 3 to 5 years ago is the highest and the lowest figure is for having not
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moved
in the last 5 years.

There are 55
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of
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people
aged between 40 and 49, which have
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moved
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house
within 5 years and
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only
14
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of
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people
living the same
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house
. By contrast in the
next
age group, the percentage of
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people
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who
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haved
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address over 3 years ago and those
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have remained the same
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in the last 5 years are almost the same, at 41
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percent
and 42
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respectively
, whereas
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17
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of
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having
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within 3 years.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in the last 3 years, between 3 to 5 years or not within the last 5 years v. 2

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3 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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