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Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) v.8

Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) v. 8
The given line graph illustrates the various acid levels in the mouth related to three different sweet foods such as fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey. The first point to note is that acid levels due to these different sweets are at a level at tooth decay is unlikely to occur both at the time of eating and after 15 minutes of eating. At the moment of eating of three sweets, acid levels are very low and equal at 7 pH. Then after 5 minutes, it dropped to a pH of 3. 5, 4. 5, and 5 by cane and fruit sugar and honey respectively. Acid levels in the mouth gradually decrease and reached to the minimum value within half an hour of cane sugar eating. Acid variations in mouth after eating fruit and cane sugar are almost equal for the next 5 minutes and followed by a difference of 1 pH value for the next 20 minutes. However, after 30minutes of eating sugar and cane sugar, pH value raised and reached to 7 and the acid level hit the lowest level. To sum up, it is clear from the graph that, the given sweets produces high levels of acids in the mouth soon after eating, but reaches to a safe level which tooth decay is not likely to occur within 10-15 minutes.
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mouth
related to three
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foods such as fruit
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,
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cane
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and honey. The
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acid
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due to these
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sweets are at a
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at tooth decay is unlikely to occur both at the time of
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and after 15 minutes of eating.

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of three sweets,
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are
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low and equal at 7 pH. Then after 5 minutes, it dropped to a pH of 3. 5, 4. 5, and 5 by
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cane
and fruit
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and honey
respectively
.
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in the
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decrease and reached to the minimum value within half an hour of
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cane
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sugar
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.
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fruit and
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are almost equal for the
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, pH value raised and reached to 7 and the
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acid
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level
hit the lowest level.

To sum up, it is
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from the graph that, the
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sweets produces high
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of
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,
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reaches to a safe
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which tooth decay is not likely to occur within 10-15 minutes.
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38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) v. 8

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
223 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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