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Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) v.10

Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) v. 10
The given illustration demonstrates the acid level, which is the inverse of the pH values, different sweet foods can create in our mouth and their possible implication for our dental health. As is given in the line graph, high acid levels are measured by the low pH level in our mouth and the lower the pH level, it is more likely to decay the tooth. According to the line graph, fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey cause, different acid levels in our mouth and their impacts last for five to 30 minutes. The pH level below 5. 5 is detrimental to our tooth. When we consume honey, the pH level of our mouth decreases to below 5. 5 within 4 minutes and that takes around 13 minutes to come out from the danger level. In the case of fruit sugar, the pH level goes below 5. 5 in 3. 5 minutes and remains in danger level for about 20 minutes. Finally, when we eat cane sugar, the pH level of our mouth goes in the danger level in 2. 5 minutes and remains in danger level for about 32 minutes. In short, honey is the safest sweet food for our dental health while cane sugar is most detrimental to our tooth as it is likely to cause the maximum decay in our tooth.
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, which is the inverse of the pH values,
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sweet foods can create in our
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and their possible implication for our dental health. As is
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in the line graph, high acid
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in our
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and the lower the pH
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, it is more likely to decay the tooth.

According to the line graph, fruit
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sugar
, cane
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sugar
and honey cause,
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acid
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levels
in our
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and their impacts last for five to 30 minutes. The pH
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below 5. 5 is detrimental to our tooth. When we consume honey, the pH
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of our
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mouth
decreases to below 5. 5 within 4 minutes and that takes around 13 minutes to
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. In the case of fruit
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, the pH
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goes below 5. 5 in 3. 5 minutes and remains in
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for about 20 minutes.
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, when we eat cane
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, the pH
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of our
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goes in the
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in 2. 5 minutes and remains in
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for about 32 minutes.

In short, honey is the safest sweet food for our dental health while cane
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sugar
is most detrimental to our tooth as it is likely to cause the maximum decay in our tooth.
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IELTS academic Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) v. 10

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