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Different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1950, 1970 and 1990 are discussed in the graph below. write a report for university lecturer describing the information in the bar chart. you should write at least 150 wor v. 2

The vertical bar chart illustrates the information about in European city people use four different modes of transport to travel between 1950 and 1990. The data has been calibrated in percentage. At the first glance, it can be clearly seen that, The ratio of traveler used in initial year was highest on foot at 38 followed by bike at 27. Whereas, the lowest percentage of commuters can be reported for car at 5 and the second lowest percentile of traveler used bus at 17. Moving further, in 1970, there were almost same percentage of commuters used Bus, Car, Bikes and foot in the range of 22 and 26. Moreover, in 1990, the highest ratio of traveler can be witnessed for Car at around 40 While the percentage of commuters used Bike and Foot was lowest at almost 5 followed by bus at 15. Overall, in the last year, the most favorable mode of transport was Car and the less preferable vehicle was Bike.

IELTS academic Different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1950, 1970 and 1990 are discussed in the graph below. write a report for university lecturer describing the information in the bar chart. you should write at least 150 wor v.2

The vertical bar chart illustrates the information about in European city
people
use
four
different
modes of transport to travel between 1950 and 1990. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage.

At the
first
glance, it can be
clearly
seen
that, The ratio of traveler
used
in initial year was
highest
on foot at 38 followed by
bike
at 27. Whereas, the lowest percentage of commuters can
be reported
for
car
at 5 and the second lowest percentile of traveler
used
bus at 17.

Moving
further
, in 1970, there were almost same percentage of commuters
used
Bus,
Car
,
Bikes
and foot in the range of 22 and 26.
Moreover
, in 1990, the highest ratio of traveler can
be witnessed
for
Car
at around 40 While the percentage of commuters
used
Bike
and Foot was lowest at almost 5 followed by bus at 15.

Overall
, in the last year, the most favorable mode of transport was
Car
and the less preferable vehicle was
Bike
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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163 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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