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Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and in1982. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and in1982.
The pie charts illustrate the information about the terms of percentage of three various kinds of communication which was used in two decades during 1962 and 1982. In overall, there were lots of transformation can be noticed in all types of communications over the periods. It can be seen from the information that communication via letter was most popular among people during 1962 which accounted at a half of the total percentage. Whilst, it declined dramatically and reached at one in ten after two decades. In contrast, between 1962, less than a fifth (15%) humans utilised computers for communicating. Interestingly, the proportion of computers for communicating had experienced a drastic increased of double at 30% from 1982. The charts further prove that more than a third masses interested to expand phone for communicating with each other’s in the first given year. Furthermore, communication via phone attained a higher figure after twenty years. Lastly, a gradual rose of two fifth can be observed in the percentage of phone used for communication among people in the last period.
The pie charts illustrate the information about the terms of percentage of three various kinds of
communication
which was
used
in two decades during 1962 and 1982.

In
overall
, there were lots of transformation can
be noticed
in all types of communications over the periods.

It can be
seen
from the information that
communication
via letter was most popular among
people
during 1962 which accounted at a half of the total percentage. Whilst, it declined
dramatically
and reached at one in ten after two decades.
In contrast
, between 1962, less than a fifth (15%) humans
utilised
computers for communicating.
Interestingly
, the proportion of computers for communicating had experienced a drastic increased of double at 30% from 1982.

The charts
further
prove that more than a third masses interested to expand phone for communicating with each other’s in the
first
given
year.
Furthermore
,
communication
via phone attained a higher figure after twenty years.
Lastly
, a gradual rose of two fifth can
be observed
in the percentage of phone
used
for
communication
among
people
in the last period.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and in1982.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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