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The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present)
The three pictures provide a layout of two villages, i. e Fonton and Meadowside, as well as various changes that have been made to the areas from 1962 until the present. Overall, Meadowside village seems to have undergone a dramatic transformation, becoming more modernized and residential with the appearance of more infrastructure and amenities. By contrast, Fonton experienced marginal changes throughout the period. It is clear that the main changes from 1962 to 1985 involve the addition of two buildings (leisure complex and superstore) and a housing estate in Meadowside village. A superstore had been constructed at the southwest corner of this village, opposite a housing estate and its adjacent leisure complex. Furthermore, a new road which passed by all three of the areas and ran through the centre of the village, had also been built. Meanwhile, a new road which connected the two villages was the only change that occurred in Fonton. Currently, Meadowside has become a suburb and the area between the two places has been significantly developed with the construction of a business park in the south, opposite a station that is linked to Fonton’s railway system. To the north of this station, a hotel has also been built.
The three pictures provide a layout of two
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villages
, i. e
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Fonton
and
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Meadowside
,
as well
as various
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changes
that have
been made
to the areas from 1962 until the present.

Overall
,
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Meadowside
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village
seems to have undergone a dramatic transformation, becoming more modernized and residential with the appearance of more infrastructure and amenities. By contrast,
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Fonton
experienced marginal
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changes
throughout the period.

It is
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clear
that the main
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changes
from 1962 to 1985 involve the addition of two buildings (leisure complex and superstore) and a housing estate in
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Meadowside
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village
. A superstore had
been constructed
at the southwest corner of this
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village
, opposite a housing estate and its adjacent leisure complex.
Furthermore
, a new road which passed by all three of the areas and ran through the
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centre
of the
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village
, had
also
been built
. Meanwhile, a new road which connected the two
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villages
was the
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only
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change
that occurred in
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Fonton
.

Currently
,
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Meadowside
has become a suburb and the area between the two places has been
significantly
developed with the construction of a business park in the south, opposite a station that
is linked
to
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Fonton
’s railway system. To the north of this station, a hotel has
also
been built
.
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10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS academic The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present)

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4 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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