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The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present)
The three pictures provide a layout of two villages, i. e Fonton and Meadowside, as well as various changes that have been made to the areas from 1962 until the present. Overall, Meadowside village seems to have undergone a dramatic transformation, becoming more modernized and residential with the appearance of more infrastructure and amenities. By contrast, Fonton experienced marginal changes throughout the period. It is clear that the main changes from 1962 to 1985 involve the addition of two buildings (leisure complex and superstore) and a housing estate in Meadowside village. A superstore had been constructed at the southwest corner of this village, opposite a housing estate and its adjacent leisure complex. Furthermore, a new road which passed by all three of the areas and ran through the centre of the village, had also been built. Meanwhile, a new road which connected the two villages was the only change that occurred in Fonton. Currently, Meadowside has become a suburb and the area between the two places has been significantly developed with the construction of a business park in the south, opposite a station that is linked to Fonton’s railway system. To the north of this station, a hotel has also been built.
The three pictures provide a layout of two
villages
, i. e
Fonton
and
Meadowside
,
as well
as various
changes
that have
been made
to the areas from 1962 until the present.

Overall
,
Meadowside
village
seems to have undergone a dramatic transformation, becoming more modernized and residential with the appearance of more infrastructure and amenities. By contrast,
Fonton
experienced marginal
changes
throughout the period.

It is
clear
that the main
changes
from 1962 to 1985 involve the addition of two buildings (leisure complex and superstore) and a housing estate in
Meadowside
village
. A superstore had
been constructed
at the southwest corner of this
village
, opposite a housing estate and its adjacent leisure complex.
Furthermore
, a new road which passed by all three of the areas and ran through the
centre
of the
village
, had
also
been built
. Meanwhile, a new road which connected the two
villages
was the
only
change
that occurred in
Fonton
.

Currently
,
Meadowside
has become a suburb and the area between the two places has been
significantly
developed with the construction of a business park in the south, opposite a station that
is linked
to
Fonton
’s railway system. To the north of this station, a hotel has
also
been built
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and present)

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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