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cambridge 6 test 4The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 200, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make co v.1

cambridge 6 test 4The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 200, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
The first chart indicates about the quantities of marriages and divorces in the period between 1970 and 2000 and the second one portrays the proportion of mature people in the United States in sectors of never married, married, widowed and divorces in 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a slight reduction in the marriage rate while the number of divorces fluctuated in a span of 30 years. The quantity of married people gained the highest percentage while the widowed and divorced persons took up the low proportion in both 1970 and 2000. It is clear from the first chart that the number of marriages stayed the same at 2, 5 millions in 1970 and 1980. However, this one decreased gradually to 2, 25 millions in 1990 and 2 millions in 2000. In the contrast, the quantity of divorces climbed up from 1 million in 1970 to 1, 4 millions in 1980. After that period, this number reduced to 1, 1 millions in 1990 and 1 million in 2000. As it can be seen from the second chart that the percentage of the married achieved the highest one with 70% in 1970 and about 60% in 2000. Never married sector ranked the second place in both 1970 and 2000, 12% and 20% respectively. The amount of Widowed and Divorces had the opposite trend in 1970 and 2000. Particularly, the proportion of widowed decreased significantly from 8% to 2% in comparison between 1970 and 2000. The divorces had the upward trend between 1970 and 2000, 5% and 9% respectively.
The
first
chart indicates about the quantities of marriages and
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divorces
in the period between 1970 and 2000 and the second one portrays the proportion of mature
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people
in the United States in sectors of never married, married,
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widowed
and
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divorces
in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, there was a slight reduction in the marriage rate while the number of
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divorces
fluctuated in a span of 30 years. The quantity of married
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people
gained the highest percentage while the
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widowed
and divorced persons took up the low proportion in both 1970 and 2000.

It is
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clear
from the
first
chart that the number of marriages stayed the same at 2, 5
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millions
in 1970 and 1980.
However
, this one decreased
gradually
to 2, 25
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millions
in 1990 and 2
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millions
in 2000. In the contrast, the quantity of
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divorces
climbed up from 1
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million
in 1970 to 1, 4
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millions
in 1980. After that period, this number
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reduced
to 1, 1
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millions
in 1990 and 1
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million
in 2000.

As it can be
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seen
from the second chart that the percentage of the married achieved the highest one with 70% in 1970 and about 60% in 2000. Never married sector ranked the second place in both 1970 and 2000, 12% and 20%
respectively
. The amount of
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Widowed
and
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Divorces
had the opposite trend in 1970 and 2000.
Particularly
, the proportion of
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widowed
decreased
significantly
from 8% to 2%
in comparison
between 1970 and 2000. The
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divorces
had the upward trend between 1970 and 2000, 5% and 9%
respectively
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic cambridge 6 test 4The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 200, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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