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Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: •thank them for the invitation•men v.4

Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: •thank them for the invitation•men v. 4
Dear Mr and Mrs Roy, I am writing this letter to thank you for inviting us in the party that you are holding at your home next saturday. However, owing to the other conspicuous plans to go out with the family members, I am unable to attend this auspicious occasion. I am having to go with my kids for the celebration of their friend' s birthday. Suddenly, we got the invitation from the them to attend the birthday party. So, this is the first, i have to go with my kids for their happiness. Being a good parent, I cannot repudiate to this plan of my kids. I make sure for celebrating the party, we can meet you on a weekend and have some quality time together. Please let me know when you can do that. Wishing you a grand party and quality time with your guests. Yours sincerely, Navpreet
Dear Mr and Mrs Roy,

I am writing this letter to thank you for inviting us in the
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party
that you are holding at your home
next
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saturday
.
However
, owing to the other conspicuous plans to go out with the family members, I am unable to attend this auspicious occasion.

I am having to
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go with
my kids for the celebration of their
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friend&
#039; s birthday.
Suddenly
, we
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got
the invitation from
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the them
to attend the birthday
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party
.
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So
, this is the
first
,
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i
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have to
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go with
my kids for their happiness. Being a
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good
parent, I cannot repudiate to this plan of my kids.

I
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make
sure for celebrating the
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party
, we can
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meet
you on a weekend and have
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some
quality time together.
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Please
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let
me know when you can do that.

Wishing you a grand
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party
and quality time with your guests.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Navpreet
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS letter Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: •thank them for the invitation•men v. 4

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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