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You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1) Explain your situation 2) Say why you feel unsure about living in th v.2

You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1) Explain your situation 2) Say why you feel unsure about living in th v. 2
Hope you’re doing well. Recently I’ve offered a job in your city. As you already know, till date, I worked in my hometown. So, somewhere I’m tensed of leaving home. The salary structure is good but unsure about few things. Firstly, could you please provide me an information on job opportunities in your city? Is the city in developing stage like have good career opportunities or not. Is it possible for consider an immense career growth in your city? Secondly, is this city is lacking in any basic amenities like electricity failures or water supply issues etc. I need to know a little bit about lifestyle too. Is the living style over there is entertaining or not, Is it same as metro cities. Lifestyle plays a major role in corporate industries. It improves our communication skill, sense of living, elegance and most importantly improve etiquettes. Please write to me whenever possible. Look forward for your reply. Yours sincerely, Ravi
Hope you’re doing well. Recently I’ve offered a job in your city. As you already know, till date, I worked in my hometown.
So
, somewhere I’m tensed of leaving home.

The salary structure is
good
but
unsure about few things.
Firstly
, could you
please
provide me an information on job opportunities in your city? Is the city in developing stage like have
good
career opportunities or not. Is it possible for consider an immense career growth in your city?

Secondly
, is this city is lacking in any basic amenities like electricity failures or water supply issues etc. I need to know a
little bit
about lifestyle too. Is the living style over there is entertaining or not, Is it same as metro
cities
. Lifestyle plays a major role in corporate industries. It
improves
our communication
skill
, sense of living, elegance and most
importantly
improve
etiquettes
.

Please
write to me whenever possible. Look forward for your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

Ravi
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1) Explain your situation 2) Say why you feel unsure about living in th v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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