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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v.7

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 7
Dear Mr and Mrs Taylor, I sincerely apologize to both of you for any inconvenience caused due to the noise from my house and thank you for bringing this to my attention. At times, we might not be aware of the problems we unintentionally cause to our neighbours and I am hoping that you would accept my apology. I can assure you that I will take the necessary steps to prevent it. As you are aware, I am a musician by profession and my work requires me to do rehearsals before a performance at odd times. In addition to this, I also provide coaching to music students in the morning. Although, I am sincere about making sure that the noise level remains low and within the range of my property, it is quite clear that it was higher this time. To address the problem of high noise level, I have called a friend of mine who is an expert in sound engineering. He has suggested ways to contain this noise problem by installing noise cancellation frames on windows and doors and making the room airtight. It may cost me a significant amount but should work in the long run. Please know that making the modification to the existing arrangement will take up to a month. I am afraid that you will have to tolerate noises for some more time, though I will try my best to keep it minimum, and hope that you will be agreeable to the proposed solution. Again, I regret the inconvenience caused to you. Yours sincerely, Prateek Roy
Dear Mr and Mrs Taylor,

I
sincerely
apologize to both of you for any inconvenience caused due to the
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noise
from my
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house
and thank you for bringing this to my attention. At times, we might not be aware of the problems we
unintentionally
cause to our
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neighbours and
I am hoping that you would accept my apology. I can assure you that I will take the necessary steps to
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prevent
it.

As you are aware, I am a musician by profession and my work requires me to do rehearsals
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before
a performance at odd times.
In addition
to this, I
also
provide coaching to music students in the morning. Although, I am sincere about making sure that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
level remains low and within the range of my property, it is quite
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that it was higher this time.

To address the problem of high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
level, I have called a friend of mine who is an expert in sound engineering. He has suggested ways to contain this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
problem by installing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
cancellation frames on windows and doors and making the room airtight. It may cost me a significant amount
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
should work in the long run.
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Please
know that making the modification to the existing arrangement will take up to a month.

I am afraid that you will
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have to
tolerate
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noises
for
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some
more time, though I will try my best to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it minimum, and hope that you will be agreeable to the proposed solution.

Again, I regret the inconvenience caused to you.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Prateek
Roy
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6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 7

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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