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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v.1

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 1
Dear Mr and Mrs Williams, I hope you are doing great. It is a shame that we do not know each other very well and I would like to apologise for that. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter that you sent me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I sincerely apologise for the inconvenience and humbly ask for your forgiveness. With the concern about home safety, my wife and I decided to install a few smoke detectors in our flat, especially after we saw a devastating fire in our neighbourhood lately. We bought the devices from an online store and started to install and test the gadgets last Sunday. To ensure that the sound of the fire alarm is loud enough and everyone in the house would notice it, we tested the devices for about 30 minutes. Although the testing took place at midday last Sunday, my wife and I are terribly sorry that your child’s nap was interrupted. I really regret the event and request your forgiveness. Please accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience. We will be more careful next time. Yours sincerely, Paul Lesner
Dear Mr and Mrs Williams,

I hope you are doing great. It is a shame that we do not know each other
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very
well and I would like to
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apologise
for that. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter that you
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sent
me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I
sincerely
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apologise
for the inconvenience and
humbly
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ask for
your forgiveness.

With the concern about home safety, my wife and I decided to install a few smoke detectors in our flat,
especially
after we
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saw
a devastating fire in our
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neighbourhood
lately. We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
the devices from an online store and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to install and
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test
the gadgets last Sunday. To ensure that the sound of the fire alarm is loud
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enough
and everyone in the
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house
would notice it, we
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tested
the devices for about 30 minutes. Although the testing took place at midday last Sunday, my wife and I are
terribly
sorry that your child’s nap
was interrupted
.

I
really
regret the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and request your forgiveness.
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Please
accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience. We will be more careful
next
time.

Yours
sincerely
,

Paul
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Lesner
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 1

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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