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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v.5

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 5
Dear Mr and Mrs Martin, Hope you are doing great. I am extremely surprised to get a letter from you indicating that you are immensely annoyed by the loud sound created in my house. Admittedly, I had no idea that the noise would reach your house at all. I am writing to apologise. Last Monday one of my windows in the kitchen was broken as a cricket ball hit it directly while some children were playing in front of my flat. I tried to refit the window in the evening after I got back from the office. It took me a long since I have no prior experience in this type of work and I regret that I did not hire a professional. Unfortunately, I thought that the sound will not reach your home but it eventually did. Since you have suffered due to the noise, I sincerely apologise for this. Moreover, I promise I will be more careful regarding this in the future. Once again, I am extremely sorry for any inconvenience that might have happened due to my negligence. Yours sincerely, Nayan Moore
Dear Mr and Mrs Martin,

Hope you are doing great. I am
extremely
surprised to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a letter from you indicating that you are
immensely
annoyed by the loud sound created in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
Admittedly
, I had no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that the noise would reach your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
at all. I am writing to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
.

Last Monday one of my windows in the kitchen
was broken
as a cricket ball hit it
directly
while
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
children were playing in front of my flat. I tried to refit the window in the evening after I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
back from the office. It took me a long since I have no prior experience in this type of work and I regret that I did not hire a professional.

Unfortunately, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that the sound will not reach your home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it
eventually
did. Since you have suffered due to the noise, I
sincerely
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for this.
Moreover
, I promise I will be more careful regarding this in the future.

Once again, I am
extremely
sorry for any inconvenience that might have happened due to my negligence.

Yours
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Nayan
Moore
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 5

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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