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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v.5

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 5

Dear Mr and Mrs Martin, Hope you are doing great. I am extremely surprised to get a letter from you indicating that you are immensely annoyed by the loud sound created in my house. Admittedly, I had no idea that the noise would reach your house at all. I am writing to apologise. Last Monday one of my windows in the kitchen was broken as a cricket ball hit it directly while some children were playing in front of my flat. I tried to refit the window in the evening after I got back from the office. It took me a long since I have no prior experience in this type of work and I regret that I did not hire a professional. Unfortunately, I thought that the sound will not reach your home but it eventually did. Since you have suffered due to the noise, I sincerely apologise for this. Moreover, I promise I will be more careful regarding this in the future. Once again, I am extremely sorry for any inconvenience that might have happened due to my negligence. Yours sincerely, Nayan Moore

Dear Mr and Mrs Martin,

Hope you are doing great. I am extremely
 surprised to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a letter from you indicating that you are immensely
 annoyed by the loud sound created in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Admittedly
, I had no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 that the noise would reach your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 at all. I am writing to Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
.

Last Monday one of my windows in the kitchen was broken
 as a cricket ball hit it directly
 while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 children were playing in front of my flat. I tried to refit the window in the evening after I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 back from the office. It took me a long since I have no prior experience in this type of work and I regret that I did not hire a professional.

Unfortunately, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that the sound will not reach your home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it eventually
 did. Since you have suffered due to the noise, I sincerely
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 for this. Moreover
, I promise I will be more careful regarding this in the future.

Once again, I am extremely
 sorry for any inconvenience that might have happened due to my negligence.

Yours sincerely
,

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Nayan
 Moore

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. v. 5

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

184 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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