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the table below shows the amount of waste production ( millions of tons) in six different countries over the twenty year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

the table below shows the amount of waste production ( millions of tons) in six different countries over the twenty year period.
The table compares data on the level of waste production in six separate countries throughout a twenty-year period. Overall, while Korea saw an significant decrease in the amount of waste discharge, the five countries remainder experienced downward trend. However, US is the largest countries producing waste over most years. In 1980, US discharged 131 millions of tones waste, which is the highest amount, followed by Japan, with 103 less millions of tons. Likewise, Poland contributed 4 millions of tons doubling the amount of waste in Portugal, which constituted 2 millions of tons. By contrast, only 0. 6 millions of tons was produced in Ireland making it the lowest figure at the same period. According to the table, it can be clearly to seen that the level of waste in US continued grow exponentially to 192 millions of tons in 2000 and remained the first ranking throughout a twenty-year period. On the contrary, a remarkable fall was observed in the amount of waste in Korea from 31 millions of ton in 1990 to 19 millions of tons in 2000. Besides, Japan produced more 21 millions of tons, compared to more 2. 6 millions of ton in Poland at the end of the given period. Additionally, starting at the lowest point in 1980, Ireland increased considerably in the level of waste, which was ending the same figure at the end of recorded year, at 5 millions of tons.
The table compares data on the level of
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waste
production in six separate countries throughout a twenty-year period.

Overall
, while Korea
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an
significant decrease in the
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amount
of
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waste
discharge, the five countries remainder experienced downward trend.
However
, US is the largest countries producing
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waste
over most years.

In 1980, US discharged 131
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millions
of tones
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waste
, which is the highest
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amount
, followed by Japan, with 103
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less
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millions
of tons.
Likewise
, Poland contributed 4
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millions
of tons doubling the
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amount
of
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waste
in Portugal, which constituted 2
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millions
of tons. By contrast,
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only
0. 6
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millions
of tons
was produced
in Ireland making it the lowest figure at the same period.

According to the table, it can be
clearly
to
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seen
that the level of
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waste
in US
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continued grow
exponentially
to 192
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millions
of tons in 2000 and remained the
first
ranking throughout a twenty-year period.
On the contrary
, a remarkable fall
was observed
in the
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amount
of
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waste
in Korea from 31
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millions
of ton in 1990 to 19
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millions
of tons in 2000.
Besides
, Japan produced more 21
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millions
of tons, compared to more 2. 6
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millions
of ton in Poland at the
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end
of the
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given
period.
Additionally
, starting at the lowest point in 1980, Ireland increased
considerably
in the level of
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waste
, which was ending the same figure at the
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end
of recorded year, at 5
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of tons.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS letter the table below shows the amount of waste production ( millions of tons) in six different countries over the twenty year period.

Letter
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4 paragraphs
236 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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