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Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community Write a letter to the newspaper In your letter suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like v.2

Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community Write a letter to the newspaper In your letter suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to request for you to consider Sam Williams for the award who has contributed lot for the community. He is well known social activist and stays at Westermind Road near South Park Avenue. Firstly, he has contributed lot towards the local area. In particular, he has helped in plantation of around 5000 plants in the region. Also, have prominently recognized for all the charity he has contributed for helpless folks of the society. What is more interesting that he have been already awarded as " Social Influencer" by not only state government but national government too for his upbringing the issue of gender equality in all aspects of the culture. It would be grateful if you could give him the award of " Local Star" along with some rewards as well. For instance, you can put charity contribution of around $500 to his " Help the Poor" foundation which will bring it in more recognition. Also, commitment can be made to take care of all the little saplings which he has forested within the area. Thank you for consideration and cooperation. Yours faithfully Joshua Ford
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to request for you to consider Sam Williams for the award who has contributed lot for the community. He is well known social activist and stays at
Westermind
Road near South Park Avenue.

Firstly
, he has contributed lot towards the local area.
In particular
, he has
helped
in plantation of around 5000 plants in the region.
Also
, have
prominently
recognized for all the charity he has contributed for helpless folks of the society.
What is more
interesting that he have been already awarded as
&quot
; Social
Influencer&quot
; by not
only
state
government
but
national
government
too for his upbringing the issue of gender equality in all aspects of the culture.

It would be grateful if you could give him the award of
&quot
; Local
Star&quot
; along with
some
rewards
as well
.
For instance
, you can put charity contribution of around $500 to his
&quot
;
Help
the
Poor&quot
; foundation which will bring it in more recognition.
Also
, commitment can
be made
to take care of all the
little
saplings which he has forested within the area.

Thank you for consideration and cooperation.

Yours
faithfully


Joshua Ford
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community Write a letter to the newspaper In your letter suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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