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You are planning to visit a foreign country. Write a letter to your friends and say: -Where and when do you plan to go? -What are the details of your plan? -Why do you want them to go with you? v.2

You are planning to visit a foreign country. Write a letter to your friends and say: -Where and when do you plan to go? -What are the details of your plan? -Why do you want them to go with you? v. 2
Dear Ramin, I’m writing this letter to inform you about my trip to Turkey. As you might know, I’m working so hard to pay back my mortgages and also to have some savings available for my children’s future. That’s why, I felt that it would be great to do something interesting to be refreshed and happy. So, I have planned to have a journey to Turkey in this summer. I’ve written any details of my trip and wanted to share it with you. The first step would be to book a quite and lovely place to stay in advance. The second one is to purchase flight tickets because the flight’s prices are increasing rapidly. And the final step would require us to note down any attractive places we want to visit. So, you have plenty of time to think and get back to me with your amazing ideas. I recall of many fantastic memories we had together at school and I thought that, it would be a great chance for us to reunion again and to have lots of unforgettable moments in Turkey. If you can accompany me in this adventure, I’ll be so grateful. I hope you are safe and sound. With regards, Reza
Dear
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Ramin
,

I’m writing this letter to inform you about my trip to Turkey.

As you might know, I’m working
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so
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hard
to pay back my mortgages and
also
to have
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some
savings available for my children’s future. That’s why, I felt that it would be great to do something interesting to
be refreshed
and happy.
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So
, I have planned to have a journey to Turkey in this summer.

I’ve written any
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details
of my trip and wanted to share it with you. The
first
step would be to book a quite and lovely place to stay in advance. The second one is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
flight tickets
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because
the flight’s prices are increasing
rapidly
. And the final step would require us to note down any attractive places we want to visit.
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So
, you have
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plenty
of time to
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think
and
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get
back to me with your amazing
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ideas
.

I recall of
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many
fantastic memories we had together at school and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that, it would be a great chance for us to reunion again and to have lots of unforgettable moments in Turkey. If you can accompany me in this adventure, I’ll be
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so
grateful.

I hope you are safe and sound.

With regards,

Reza
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter You are planning to visit a foreign country. Write a letter to your friends and say: -Where and when do you plan to go? -What are the details of your plan? -Why do you want them to go with you? v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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