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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. v.3

You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. v. 3
Dear Rajib, Hope you are doing great. I'm writing to let you know that I have decided to sell some of my furniture. I will move to a new city soon and my new apartment is not big enough to accommodate all of my furniture. I thought you might be interested to buy some of the furniture I have planned to sell. You know that I've recently been transferred to Rajshahi. It's great news for me because I have wished to live there for a long. However, there's a problem- the new flat is smaller than my current one and I will need to sell some of my furniture. More specifically, I want to sell my dining and sofa set. Last month, you came to my house on the occasion of my younger daughter's birthday. I remember you inquiring about the dining table and the sofa set and I thought you might want to have those. Nevertheless, it's a large dining table including six chairs made of mahogany wood. Besides, the sofa I own is a modern fabric Scandinavian sofa set that was placed in my living room. I would rather sell the furniture to someone know that an unknown person and willing to offer a reasonable price. You can come anytime you want and inspect the furniture. If you feel that the yare perfect for you, you can buy those. Don't worry about the price. No more today, speak to you soon. Warm wishes, Rahim Ali
Dear
Rajib
,

Hope you are doing great. I'm writing to
let
you know that I have decided to
sell
some
of my
furniture
. I will
move
to a
new
city
soon
and my
new
apartment is not
big
enough
to accommodate all of my
furniture
.
I
thought
you might
be interested
to
buy
some of the
furniture
I have planned to sell.

You know that I've recently
been transferred
to
Rajshahi
. It's great
news
for me
because
I have wished to
live
there for a long.
However
, there's a problem- the
new
flat is smaller than my
current
one and I will need to
sell
some
of my
furniture
. More
specifically
, I want to
sell
my dining and
sofa
set.

Last month, you came to my
house
on the occasion of my younger daughter's birthday. I remember you inquiring about the dining table and the
sofa
set and I
thought
you might want to have those.
Nevertheless
, it's a large dining table including six chairs made of mahogany wood.
Besides
, the
sofa
I
own
is a modern fabric Scandinavian
sofa
set that
was placed
in my living room. I would
rather
sell
the
furniture
to someone
know
that an unknown person and willing to offer a reasonable price.

You can
come
anytime you want and inspect the
furniture
. If you feel that the
yare
perfect for you, you can
buy
those. Don't worry about the price.

No more
today
, speak to you
soon
.

Warm wishes,

Rahim Ali
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. v. 3

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
246 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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