Respected Sir,
I am writing this letter with a mixed feeling of excitement and worries at the same time. First of all, I would like to appreciate the whole plan as I was waiting for such plan which covers both health and adventure areas of a person’s interest. I am fond of hiking and traveling through mountains and this tour of yours seems best to achieve my craving of mountain expedition.
Considering the duration of the plan, i. e. one week, I must have to make arrangements at my end. Just to make sure that I must not miss this opportunity, I would like you to inform me about dates of this venture. In addition to this, please share the cost of this whole endeavor so that I can manage my ends.
In the end, I would like to share the point which is bothering me, i. e. my weight and breathing issue. I am a bit over weight and this thing impacts on my breathing as well. I want to know the exact length of that we will cover by walking through these mountains and the way forward as if we have to walk continuously or there will be stopovers to get your breath during the walk?
Your apt response in this regard will help me in taking decision accordingly. Hope to get a positive reply soon.
Yours truly,
John.
Respected Sir,
I am writing this letter with a mixed feeling of excitement and worries at the same time.
First of all
, I would like to appreciate the whole plan as I was waiting for such plan which covers both health and adventure areas of a person’s interest. I am fond of hiking and traveling through mountains and this tour of yours seems best to achieve my craving of mountain expedition.
Considering the duration of the plan,
i. e.
one week, I
must
have to
make
arrangements at my
end
.
Just
to
make
sure that I
must
not miss this opportunity, I would like you to inform me about dates of this venture.
In addition
to this,
please
share the cost of this whole endeavor
so
that I can manage my ends.
In the
end
, I would like to share the point which is bothering me,
i. e.
my weight and breathing issue. I am a bit over weight and this thing impacts on my breathing
as well
. I want to know the exact length of that we will cover by walking through these mountains and the way forward as if we
have to
walk
continuously
or there will be stopovers to
get
your breath during the walk?
Your apt response in this regard will
help
me in taking decision
accordingly
. Hope to
get
a
positive
reply
soon
.
Yours
truly
,
John.
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