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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. v.7

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. v. 7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire about my lost suitcase. I took a flight by the Saudia Airline from Singapore to London last week and the flight number was SK2547. Unfortunately, when I reached the London City Airport, I could not find my suitcase anywhere. I am hoping you would discover the suitcase and inform me once found. The suitcase is black, medium in size and made of pure leather. A small scratch is visible on the left side and it has three zippers. The handle is brown and made of metal. It contains some important documents, a fountain pen, a diary, and some clothing items. The business documents inside the suitcase are indispensable for me. Although I have registered the lost item ten days ago, I am yet to hear any update from the airline. I am disappointed with the customer service and hope that you would help me locate the suitcase urgently. Please update me about the whereabouts of the suitcase and oblige thereby. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ayub Ali
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about my lost
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
. I took a flight by the
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Saudia
Airline from Singapore to London last week and the flight number was SK2547. Unfortunately, when I reached the London City Airport, I could not find my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
anywhere. I am hoping you would discover the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
and inform me once found.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
is black,
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medium in size
and made of pure leather. A
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small
scratch is visible on the
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left
side and it has three zippers. The handle is brown and made of metal. It contains
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some
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important
documents, a fountain pen, a diary, and
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some
clothing items. The business documents inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
are indispensable for me.

Although I have registered the lost item ten days ago, I am
yet
to hear any update from the airline. I
am disappointed
with the customer service and hope that you would
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help
me locate the
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suitcase
urgently
.
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Please
update me about the whereabouts of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
and oblige thereby.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ayub
Ali
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. v. 7

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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