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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. v.4

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. v. 4
Dear Sir or Madam, I was one of the passengers who took the flight from Narita, Tokyo to Heathrow, London on 7th September. Unfortunately, my suitcase was lost and I could not find it after I arrived at Heathrow Airport. Although I searched it for an hour and afterwards lodged a written complaint to the luggage claim department, I have not been contacted yet by anyone regarding the whereabouts of the luggage. My suitcase is Grey Samsonite and approximately 10x95 cm in diameter. It has 3 stickers on one side and a heart-shaped sticker on the other side. The front of the luggage has a small scratch near the main zipper. My initials "DF" are also written on the front. It contains some clothing items, a few books and a copy of my university thesis, which I urgently require. I would really appreciate if you could urgently locate my suitcase and update me regarding this. My luggage claim number was 00026 and I can be contacted on my mobile phone, which is +2154875424, anytime. Thank you for giving the matter your attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Daniel Fillip
Dear Sir or Madam,

I was one of the passengers who took the flight from
Narita
, Tokyo to Heathrow, London on 7th September. Unfortunately, my suitcase
was lost
and I could not find it after I arrived at Heathrow Airport. Although I searched it for an hour and afterwards lodged a written complaint to the luggage claim department, I have not
been contacted
yet
by anyone regarding the whereabouts of the luggage.

My suitcase is Grey Samsonite and approximately
10x95
cm in diameter. It has 3 stickers on one side and a heart-shaped sticker on the other side. The front of the luggage has a
small
scratch near the main zipper. My initials
"
DF
"
are
also
written on the front. It contains
some
clothing items, a few books and a copy of my university thesis, which I
urgently
require.

I would
really
appreciate if you could
urgently
locate my suitcase and update me regarding this. My luggage claim number was 00026 and I can
be contacted
on my mobile phone, which is +2154875424, anytime.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Daniel Fillip
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. v. 4

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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