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Write a letter to your English-speaking friend telling him/her about a local event that is totake place in your town, which would be useful to her/him. In your letter- Mention the event- What are the activities involved- Mention the arrangements you would v.2

Write a letter to your English-speaking friend telling him/her about a local event that is totake place in your town, which would be useful to her/him. In your letter- Mention the event- What are the activities involved- Mention the arrangements you would v. 2
Keylaz: Keylaz: Dear china, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. I am writing to let you about the event that will be held on 22nd February 2018 which I know will be important to you. The event is the famous new yam festival in my home town Ozubulu, it is held once every year at the king' s palace. Let me explain the activities involved in more detail. There will be two major activities on that day. Firstly, the cultural dance presentation. Here the beautiful maiden' s of the town will show case their uncommon dance moves, I' m sure you will like this one, you always have a thing for dark-skinned women. Secondly, there will be cooking competition where various clan will exhibit their culinary skills. Guests will served with the toothsome meal of the winners of the cooking competition. You' re a quite a foodie, you' ll will be opportune to choose from different gourmet of dishes available. I have made accommodation reservations for you at the prestigious five-star hotel, the Grand hotels in my village. They are excellent in their services and they have top-notch security services. I look forward to seeing you. My regards to your family. Best wishes, Keylaz.
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Keylaz
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Dear china,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. I am writing to
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let
you about the
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event
that will
be held
on 22nd February 2018 which I know will be
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important
to you.

The
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event
is the
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famous
new yam festival in my home town
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Ozubulu
, it
is held
once every year at the
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king&
#039; s palace.

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Let
me
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explain
the activities involved in more detail. There will be two major activities on that day.
Firstly
, the cultural dance presentation. Here the
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beautiful
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maiden&
#039; s of the town will
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show
case their uncommon dance
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moves
,
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I&
#039; m sure you will like this one, you always have a thing for dark-skinned women.
Secondly
, there will be cooking competition where various clan will exhibit their culinary
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skills
. Guests will served with the toothsome meal of the winners of the cooking competition.
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You&
#039; re a quite a foodie,
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you&
#039; ll will be opportune to choose from
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different
gourmet of dishes available.

I have made accommodation reservations for you at the prestigious five-star hotel, the Grand hotels in my village. They are excellent in their
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
services and
they have top-notch security services.

I look forward to seeing you. My regards to your family.

Best wishes,

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Keylaz
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2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your English-speaking friend telling him/her about a local event that is totake place in your town, which would be useful to her/him. In your letter- Mention the event- What are the activities involved- Mention the arrangements you would v. 2

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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