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You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in. v.1

You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in. v. 1
Dear Farah, It was great to see you after such a long time. I would also like to thank you again for being such an awesome host by offering me to stay at your house during my business seminar. Anyway, the reason, for which I am bugging you again with this letter, is that while I left your home last Friday, I believe that I accidentally let a file with some important documents in it. I came to know about this file only after arriving at my home yesterday morning. If I remember it correctly, I think that I may have left the file in the bottom drawer of your TV stand in the living room where I was sleeping. I am pretty sure that you won’t miss the file since it is a standard size, yellow colour file envelope that has my name tag on it. By the way, the file contains some important financial documents. Please mail this file to me in courier service as soon as possible because, without these documents, I won’t be able to prepare my next quarterly report for my company CEO. Stay fine and have fun. Yours sincerely, Claudia
Dear Farah,

It was great to
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see
you after such a long time. I would
also
like to thank you again for being such an awesome host by offering me to stay at your
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house
during my business seminar.

Anyway, the reason, for which I am bugging you again with this letter, is that while I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
your home last Friday, I believe that I
accidentally
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let
a
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file
with
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some
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important
documents in it. I came to know about this
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file
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only
after arriving at my home yesterday morning.

If I remember it
correctly
, I
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think
that I may have
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left
the
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file
in the bottom drawer of your TV stand in the living room where I was sleeping. I am pretty sure that you won’t miss the
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file
since it is a standard size, yellow
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colour
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file
envelope that has my name tag on it. By the way, the
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file
contains
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some
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important
financial documents.

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Please
mail this
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file
to me in courier service as
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soon
as possible
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because
, without these documents, I won’t be able to prepare my
next
quarterly report for my
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company
CEO.

Stay fine and have fun.

Yours
sincerely
,

Claudia
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in. v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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