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U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend: Describe the fileAsk him to return it to you by postAsk him about the appro v.2

U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend: Describe the fileAsk him to return it to you by postAsk him about the appro v. 2
Dear Roy, The last time we met was when I came to Australia to attend a business seminar and I stayed at your home. It just so happened that I forgot a very important file containing all my documents in your cupboard. I kept it there with my clothes but in hurry to catch the flight I forgot to pack it. The file contains my newly updated resume DMC from my school and college Provisional certificate Certificate in sport activities Certificates of co curricular activities held at hostels and science exhibition Certificate of participation in workshop. It will be very helpful if you can send me that file by speed post. You understand how important that is. Please tell me the approximate cost of sending that file. I will reimburse that amount into your account. Yours faithfully John Cena.
Dear Roy,

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Certificate in sport activities

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Certificate of participation in workshop.

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. I will reimburse that amount into your account.

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John
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IELTS letter U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend: Describe the fileAsk him to return it to you by postAsk him about the appro v. 2

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  American English
11 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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