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People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. v.2

People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. v. 2
I am writing to let you know that we are experiencing a disruptive internet connection in our area for the last two weeks. We are very concerned about the unstable internet connectivity, and the inconvenience is hampering our work and life to a great extent. I hope you will investigate the problem and take the appropriate steps to solve it. While the average internet speed is unbelievably slow now, we often experience no connectivity at all. The average download speed in the past was more than 50MB/s which has dropped to less than 2MB/s these days. There is little hope for sharing large files and videos and people who work from home are suffering immensely due to this sluggish connection. People who make video calls are the worst sufferer. I believe it is your responsibility to make sure things like this are addressed promptly. I assume that in order to maintain user trust, your team needs to work very hard to make sure this does not happen again. Please check the cables and routers installed in our area to find and solve the problem. I hope you will take steps to prove that you are worthy of our trust. Yours sincerely, David Buchanan
I am writing to
let
you know that we are experiencing a disruptive internet connection in our area for the last two weeks. We are
very
concerned about the unstable internet connectivity, and the inconvenience is hampering our work and life to a great extent. I hope you will investigate the problem and take the appropriate steps to solve it.

While the average internet speed is
unbelievably
slow
now
, we
often
experience no connectivity at all. The average download speed in the past was more than
50MB
/s which has dropped to less than
2MB
/s these days. There is
little
hope for sharing large files and videos and
people
who work from home are suffering
immensely
due to this sluggish connection.
People
who
make
video calls are the worst sufferer.

I believe it is your responsibility to
make
sure things like this
are addressed
promptly
. I assume that in order to maintain user trust, your team needs to work
very
hard
to
make
sure this does not happen again.
Please
check
the cables and routers installed in our area to find and solve the problem.

I hope you will take steps to prove that you are worthy of our trust.

Yours
sincerely
,

David Buchanan
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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