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People in your area are having problems wit their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter. Describe the problems, Explain how they are affecting people, say what the company should do to help v.4

People in your area are having problems wit their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter. Describe the problems, Explain how they are affecting people, say what the company should do to help v. 4
Dear Sir, Good day! I am Maria Judith Parayno, 23 years old. I live at Cogeo, Antipolo City. I wrote this letter because I have an internet Service provided by Globe, your company. Right now, people in our area having problems with our internet connection. As a result, my family and I cannot watched online movies, download files and search informations for school and work purposes, like we used to. In addition, we used internet to connect to our family away from home and that is our only way to keep in touch to our loved ones. Now, we can not do all of those things due to this inconvenience. Your company knows that with these issues you need to give us credits for the days that we are unable to use our internet service. Also, I dont want to change provider, so I recommend that your company should resolve this issue as soon as possible. Hopefully, this concern will be fixed right away. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Maria Judith Parayno
Dear Sir,

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day! I am Maria Judith
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Parayno
, 23 years
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. I
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live
at
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Cogeo
,
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Antipolo
City.
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I
wrote this letter
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because
I have an internet Service provided by Globe, your
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company
. Right
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now
,
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people
in our area having problems with our internet connection.

As a result
, my family and I cannot
The verb 'cannot' requires the base form of the verb: "watch"
watched
online movies, download files and search
The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?
informations
for school and work purposes, like we
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used
to.
In addition
, we
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used
internet to connect to our family away from home and
that is
our
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only
way to
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keep
in touch to our
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loved
ones.
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Now
, we can not do all of those things due to this inconvenience. Your
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company
knows that with these issues you need to give us credits for the days that we are unable to
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use
our internet service.
Also
, I
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dont
want to
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change
provider,
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so
I recommend that your
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company
should resolve this issue as
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soon
as possible.

Hopefully
, this concern will be
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fixed
right away. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely
yours,

Maria Judith
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Parayno
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter People in your area are having problems wit their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter. Describe the problems, Explain how they are affecting people, say what the company should do to help v. 4

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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