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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. •Write a letter to your insurance compan v.36

Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. •Write a letter to your insurance compan v. 36

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to complain about the increasing in the insurance premium for my car starting from the next month. If your esteemed company raised the insurance premium, this would result in a 20% in the amount I paid every month. So, kindly be informed that I have been with you esteemed company for more than five years as a golden client. During this period, I have never made a claim on my insurance. Accordingly, as the current conditions of the financial market and cars marker, this is a large rate. I would therefore like you to arrange an urgent meeting with you and your respectful team in order to provide me with an explanation for such a raise and to look for a solution to obviate the rising of the insurance premium for my car. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Paula

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to complain about the increasing in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallowancecoverageguarantee
insurance
 premium for my car starting from the next
 month.

If your esteemed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 raised the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallowancecoverageguarantee
insurance
 premium, this would result in a 20% in the amount I paid every month.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, kindly be informed
 that I have been with you esteemed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 for more than five years as a golden client. During this period, I have never made a claim on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallowancecoverageguarantee
insurance
. Accordingly
, as the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 conditions of the financial market and cars marker, this is a large rate.

I would therefore
 like you to arrange an urgent meeting with you and your respectful team in order to provide me with an

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterExplanation
explanation
 for such a raise and to look for a solution to obviate the rising of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withallowancecoverageguarantee
insurance
 premium for my car.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Paula

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. •Write a letter to your insurance compan v. 36

Letter

American English

9 paragraphs

152 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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