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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. •Write a letter to your insurance compan v.36

Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. •Write a letter to your insurance compan v. 36
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to complain about the increasing in the insurance premium for my car starting from the next month. If your esteemed company raised the insurance premium, this would result in a 20% in the amount I paid every month. So, kindly be informed that I have been with you esteemed company for more than five years as a golden client. During this period, I have never made a claim on my insurance. Accordingly, as the current conditions of the financial market and cars marker, this is a large rate. I would therefore like you to arrange an urgent meeting with you and your respectful team in order to provide me with an explanation for such a raise and to look for a solution to obviate the rising of the insurance premium for my car. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Paula
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to complain about the increasing in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
premium for my car starting from the
next
month.

If your esteemed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
raised the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
premium, this would result in a 20% in the amount I paid every month.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, kindly
be informed
that I have been with you esteemed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for more than five years as a golden client. During this period, I have never made a claim on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
.
Accordingly
, as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
conditions of the financial market and cars marker, this is a large rate.

I would
therefore
like you to arrange an urgent meeting with you and your respectful team in order to provide me with an

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
explanation
for such a raise and to look for a solution to obviate the rising of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
premium for my car.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Paula
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. •Write a letter to your insurance compan v. 36

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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