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I do not have any words to express myself After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. •Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are wri v.2

I do not have any words to express myself After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. •Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are wri v. 2
Dear Janice, I am writing this letter to thank you for all the help and time you spend taking care of me when I was seriously injured. I am finally back to my home after staying at the hospital for 7 days. I will never forget that traumatic accident which almost took my life. A small mistake with my friend changed everything. They say somethings happen for a reason and maybe this was a reason meant to meet you. My mother told me you were the one who brought me to the hospital, after that accident and stayed with me all the time for 2 days when they were unable to track my family. After all this, I believe that there are some good people left in this world who care about humanity. I would like to invite you to my home for dinner to show a token of appreciation and to meet my family, so we can thank you for everything you did. Yours Faithfully, Malik
Dear Janice,

I am writing this letter to thank you for all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and time you spend taking care of me when I was
seriously
injured.

I am
finally
back to my home after staying at the hospital for 7 days.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will never forget that traumatic accident which almost took my life. A
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
mistake with my friend
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
everything. They say somethings happen for a reason and maybe this was a reason meant to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you. My mother
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me you were the one who brought me to the hospital, after that accident and stayed with me all the time for 2 days when they were unable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
my family.

After all
this, I believe that there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
in this world who care about humanity. I would like to invite you to my home for dinner to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
a token of appreciation and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
my family,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we can thank you for everything you did.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Malik
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS letter I do not have any words to express myself After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. •Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are wri v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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