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I do not have any words to express myself After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. •Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are wri v.2

I do not have any words to express myself After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. •Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are wri v. 2

Dear Janice, I am writing this letter to thank you for all the help and time you spend taking care of me when I was seriously injured. I am finally back to my home after staying at the hospital for 7 days. I will never forget that traumatic accident which almost took my life. A small mistake with my friend changed everything. They say somethings happen for a reason and maybe this was a reason meant to meet you. My mother told me you were the one who brought me to the hospital, after that accident and stayed with me all the time for 2 days when they were unable to track my family. After all this, I believe that there are some good people left in this world who care about humanity. I would like to invite you to my home for dinner to show a token of appreciation and to meet my family, so we can thank you for everything you did. Yours Faithfully, Malik

Dear Janice,

I am writing this letter to thank you for all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and time you spend taking care of me when I was seriously
 injured.

I am finally
 back to my home after staying at the hospital for 7 days. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will never forget that traumatic accident which almost took my life. A This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 mistake with my friend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 everything. They say somethings happen for a reason and maybe this was a reason meant to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you. My mother This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me you were the one who brought me to the hospital, after that accident and stayed with me all the time for 2 days when they were unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 my family.

After all
 this, I believe that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in this world who care about humanity. I would like to invite you to my home for dinner to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 a token of appreciation and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 my family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can thank you for everything you did.

Yours Faithfully
,

Malik

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter I do not have any words to express myself After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. •Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are wri v. 2

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

166 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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