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You had recently joined a morning course but now you can’t continue as you have got a job. Write a letter to the course instructor explaining why you can’t continue the course, how it can be difficult for you to manage your job and the course etc. You v.2

You had recently joined a morning course but now you can’t continue as you have got a job. Write a letter to the course instructor explaining why you can’t continue the course, how it can be difficult for you to manage your job and the course etc. You v. 2
Dear Sir, I have been attending your morning advanced English class since April’2018 and I must acknowledge that with your able guidance, I not only learned a lot but also got inquisitiveness to know more on English literature. I am writing this letter to inform you that I shall not be able to continue the classes any more. In March’2018, I applied for warehouse supervisor and interview was done on 15th April’2018 at London. In last week, I was given a call by HR manager, confirming about my selection for post and I was also requested to join as early as possible because company wanted to extend the operation in midland very aggressively. Though, my posting is in Nottingham area, I would have to go far from city near to highway road, thereby, I would start around 7: 00 am morning. As a result, it would not be feasible for me to complete the class each day. Even coming to class in morning could be a challenge as I would not get time to ready for office and cook my breakfast. Therefore, I have decided to discontinue the class and concentrate on job which I have been searching after completion of my post graduate degree. I would not ask for any fee refund, though I expect that fee could be reserved at your end and if I get opportunity in future to join your class, it should be adjusted. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely RAMA
Dear Sir,

I have been attending your morning advanced English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
since April’2018 and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
acknowledge that with your able guidance, I not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
learned a lot
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
inquisitiveness to know more on English literature. I am writing this letter to inform you that I shall not be able to continue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?
any more
.

In March’2018, I applied for warehouse supervisor and interview
was done
on 15th April’2018 at London. In last week, I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
a call by HR manager, confirming about my selection for
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
post and
I was
also
requested to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
as early as possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
wanted to extend the operation in midland
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
aggressively
. Though, my posting is in Nottingham area, I would
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go far from city near to highway road, thereby, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
around 7: 00 am morning.
As a result
, it would not be feasible for me to complete the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
each day. Even coming to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
in morning could be a challenge as I would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
time to ready for office and cook my breakfast.
Therefore
, I have decided to discontinue the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and concentrate on job which I have been searching after completion of my post graduate degree.

I would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
any fee refund, though I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
that fee could
be reserved
at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
and if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
opportunity in future to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
, it should
be adjusted
.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely


RAMA
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You had recently joined a morning course but now you can’t continue as you have got a job. Write a letter to the course instructor explaining why you can’t continue the course, how it can be difficult for you to manage your job and the course etc. You v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
249 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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