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You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter- Describe your knowledge of the city. - Explain what informatio v.2

You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter- Describe your knowledge of the city. - Explain what informatio v. 2
Dear Mr. Smith, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing regarding the faulty information you wrote in the article that was published in the last week in The Pyramids newspaper. It says that transportation is not convenient in Alexandria and the streets are always crowded. First and foremost, there is a variety of transportation methods in Alexandria. Since it consists of more than 5 million citizens, the government has supplied the city with numerous microbus stations in every district. Furthermore, the bus service is incredible too because it travels through some routes that are not accessible by any other transportation method. In fact, not only will this wrong data influence the city' s popularity, but it will also affect newspaper credibility. For example, many tourists may refrain from visiting Alexandria due to the untrue news about the poor transportation system. Moreover, Owing to the fact that vast numbers of readers seek to buy the most trustworthy newspaper, they will be extremely frustrated when they know that it includes incorrect information. Finally, I wonder if the newspaper could publish an apology on tomorrow' s edition in order to avoid people' s criticism. In addition, an investigation about the town' s transportation methods will be immensely beneficial to alter the published data to an accurate one. Thanks a lot for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Mark Ryan
Dear Mr. Smith,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing regarding the faulty information you wrote in the article that
was published
in the last week in The Pyramids
newspaper
. It says that
transportation
is not convenient in Alexandria and the streets are always crowded.

First
and foremost, there is a variety of
transportation
methods in Alexandria. Since it consists of more than 5 million citizens, the
government
has supplied the city with numerous
microbus
stations in every district.
Furthermore
, the bus service is incredible too
because
it travels through
some
routes that are not accessible by any other
transportation
method.

In fact, not
only
will this
wrong
data influence the
city&
#039; s popularity,
but
it will
also
affect
newspaper
credibility.
For example
,
many
tourists may refrain from visiting Alexandria due to the untrue news about the poor
transportation
system.
Moreover
, Owing to the fact that vast numbers of readers seek to
buy
the most trustworthy
newspaper
, they will be
extremely
frustrated when they know that it includes incorrect information.

Finally
, I wonder if the
newspaper
could publish an apology on
tomorrow&
#039; s edition in order to avoid
people&
#039; s criticism.
In addition
, an investigation about the
town&
#039; s
transportation
methods will be
immensely
beneficial to alter the published data to an accurate one.

Thanks a lot for your consideration.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Mark Ryan
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter- Describe your knowledge of the city. - Explain what informatio v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
226 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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