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You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. v. 2

Dear Sir or Madam, I stayed at your Lilo Hotel in Adelaide from 2nd to 5th April 2020 in room 254. I am writing for your assistance in finding the bag that I have left in the room during my stay at your hotel. Firstly, I am gratified to have outstanding service at your hotel. I really enjoyed it and I would definitely like to come again. Now, I would like you to help me locate my bag. It is a black bag and has blue stripes on both ends with two zippers attached to it. The bag that I left at your hotel contains some important documents and some of my personal belongings including contact cards, a few dresses, pens and a diary. You are already aware of the fact that I visited Adelaide to attend a professional meeting. To keep pace with my colleagues, I hurried to check out and left the bag in the closet. Please check with your lost and found department about the bag and inform me at your earliest so that I can come to pick my bag. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Fahad Sultan

IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. v.2

Dear Sir or Madam, I stayed at your Lilo Hotel in Adelaide from 2nd to 5th April 2020 in room 254. I am writing for your assistance in finding the bag that I have
left
in the room during my stay at your hotel.
Firstly
, I
am gratified
to have outstanding service at your hotel. I
really
enjoyed it and I would definitely like to
come
again.
Now
, I would like you to
help
me locate my bag. It is a black bag and has blue stripes on both ends with two zippers attached to it. The bag that I
left
at your hotel contains
some
important
documents and
some
of my personal belongings including contact cards, a few dresses, pens and a diary. You are already aware of the fact that I visited Adelaide to attend a professional meeting. To
keep
pace with my colleagues, I hurried to
check
out and
left
the bag in the closet.
Please
check
with your lost and found department about the bag and inform me at your earliest
so
that I can
come
to pick my bag. I look forward to hearing from you
soon
. Yours
faithfully
, Fahad Sultan
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6
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