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Write a letter to your English speaking friend to invite him her to see a movie about your country In your letter say Describe the movie Why would he she find it interesting Suggest an arrangement to watch the movie together v.2

Write a letter to your English speaking friend to invite him her to see a movie about your country In your letter say Describe the movie Why would he she find it interesting Suggest an arrangement to watch the movie together v. 2
Dear Mohan, I hope you and your family are all well! It was so wonderful to spend time with you during my stay at your home in the last summer. I heard that you are coming to Hyderabad in the last week of March for attending a business seminar. I am eagerly waiting to meet you up. I am making some plans to cherish your moments with me in Hyderabad when you are here. I am booking movie tickets to watch a movie named Gandhi, which narrates the story of my country' s freedom struggle with the British government. As you are very fond of history, I thought this film will make you very happy and fills you with the voyage of the Indian freedom struggle. I will pick you up from the hotel after completion of your seminar. I will be there by 5: 00 pm so that we will reach the theatre on time. After that, I have planned a dinner together with our childhood friends, then we will go to my home to spend time with family. I look forward to seeing you. Best wishes, Suresh
Dear
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Mohan
,

I hope you and your family are all well! It was
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so
wonderful to spend time with you during my stay at your home in the last summer. I heard that you are coming to Hyderabad in the last week of March for attending a business seminar. I am
eagerly
waiting to
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meet
you up.

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I
am making
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some
plans to cherish your moments with me in Hyderabad when you are here.
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I
am booking movie tickets to
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watch
a movie named Gandhi, which narrates the story of my
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country&
#039; s freedom struggle with the British
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government
. As you are
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very
fond of history, I
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thought
this film will
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make
you
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very
happy and fills you with the voyage of the Indian freedom struggle.

I will pick you up from the hotel after completion of your seminar. I will be there by 5: 00 pm
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so
that we will reach the
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theatre
on time. After that, I have planned a dinner together with our childhood friends, then we will go to my home to spend time with family.

I look forward to seeing you.

Best wishes,

Suresh
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your English speaking friend to invite him her to see a movie about your country In your letter say Describe the movie Why would he she find it interesting Suggest an arrangement to watch the movie together v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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