To Whom It May Concern,
My name is Valli, and I have been a customer of your company for several years. I have confidently shopped at your premises, knowing that I would be completely taken care of in the event of a potential problem.
However, I have recently faced a predicament in dealing with your company that disappointed me greatly. To make a long story short, I had purchased a camera from your store, but upon taking it home and unboxing it, I found it to be faulty. Realizing that there always a probability of finding a faulty item at any store, I returned the camera for repair, relying on your company' s immaculate after-sales services. To my chagrin, however, I am yet to hear back from the store and it has been a week since I have last spoken to them.
This is unfortunate that a great company like yours is damaging its reputation through potential errors of its representatives. I will be delighted if you either send me a new camera or refund me the entire sum I had paid for this faulty paraphernalia. If possible, get back to me at your earliest convenience.
Regards,
Valli
To Whom It May Concern,
My name is  
Valli
, and I have been a customer of your  
company
 for several years. I have  
confidently
 shopped at your premises, knowing that I would be completely taken care of in the  
event
 of a potential problem. 
However
, I have recently faced a predicament in dealing with your  
company
 that disappointed me  
greatly
. To  
make
 a long story short, I had  
purchased
 a camera from your store,  
but
 upon taking it home and unboxing it, I found it to be faulty. Realizing that there always a probability of finding a faulty item at any store, I returned the camera for repair, relying on your  
company&
#039; s immaculate after-sales services. To my chagrin,  
however
, I am  
yet
 to hear back from the store and it has been a week since I have last spoken to them.
This is unfortunate that a great  
company
 like yours is damaging its reputation through potential errors of its representatives. I will  
be delighted
 if you either  
send
 me a new camera or refund me the entire sum I had paid for this faulty paraphernalia. If possible,  
get
 back to me at your earliest convenience.
Regards, 
Valli
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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