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You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college Write a letter to the secretary of the international community In your letter you should tell accept invitation and suggest preferable dates t v.3

You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college Write a letter to the secretary of the international community In your letter you should tell accept invitation and suggest preferable dates t v. 3
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to an invitation I received invitation from your institute to give a speech about my country. I am humbly accept this invitation and looking forward to give an informative speech to the audiences. In fact, I have travel dates at this Month end, however I am flexible to re-schedule my travel dates to attend this occasion. I am available between 25th to 28th of this Month during morning hours. In my speech, I am planning to cover different topics related to History, Politics, Culture, Atmosphere of my country, however the most concentrated subject of my speech will be how young kids of my country is getting benefitted from Governmental schemes for study. For this speech, I am planning to show some of the presentation slides, so I will need Laptop, Speaker and a small table at the minimum. however if I get artificial robots, automatic car for showing to audience while I am giving my speech, that will be greatly appreciated. Again, I would like to thank you and your institute to consider me to deliver a speech and I am eagerly looking forward for the day. Yours Faithfully, Joe Smith
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
an invitation I received invitation from your institute to give a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speech
about my country. I am
humbly
Consider using a past participle here: "accepted".
accept
this invitation and looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to giving".
to give
an informative
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speech
to the audiences. In fact, I have travel dates at this Month
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
,
however
I am flexible to re-schedule my travel dates to attend this occasion. I am available between 25th to 28th of this Month during morning hours. In my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speech
, I am planning to cover
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
topics related to History, Politics, Culture, Atmosphere of my country,
however
the most concentrated subject of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speech
will be how young kids of my country is getting
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benefitted
from Governmental schemes for study.

For this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speech
, I am planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
presentation slides,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I will need Laptop, Speaker and a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
table at the minimum.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
however
if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
artificial robots, automatic car for showing to audience while I am giving my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speech
, that will be
greatly
appreciated.

Again, I would like to thank you and your institute to consider me to deliver a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
speech and
I am
eagerly
looking forward for the day.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Joe Smith
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college Write a letter to the secretary of the international community In your letter you should tell accept invitation and suggest preferable dates t v. 3

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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