Dear James,
I’ve recently got your letter and feel a bit disappointed that there is no opportunity to talk to each other more frequent. However, I’m very glad that you have finally graduated a high school and will start a new life soon. I think you need to take a break with your educational process and try to work for a while. There are more difficult subjects there and you will have caught up with studying and don’t have a free time at all.
By the way, there are a lot of programs provided by local companies in your city that aimed to employ predominantly youth. This is a good opportunity for you to try yourself working and, moreover, collect money for your forthcoming education. When you finally decide to study in college or university, you’ll have enough cash to pay your studying fees.
I want to advise you to buy some local newspapers. There are units with job advertisements. But first of all, you need to make an appropriate CV. Don’t forget to note your communication abilities. I think, consultant in supermarket is good job position to start with. Especially, in electronic department. This is your field.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you about job finding and wish you good luck!
Your sincerely,
Givi
Dear James,
I’ve recently
got
your letter and feel a bit disappointed that there is no opportunity to talk to each other more frequent.
However
, I’m
very
glad that you have
finally
graduated
a high school and will
start
a new life
soon
. I
think
you need to take a break with your educational process and try to work for a while. There are more difficult subjects there and you will have caught up with studying and don’t have a free time at all.
By the way, there are
a lot of
programs provided by local
companies
in your city that aimed to employ
predominantly
youth. This is a
good
opportunity for you to try yourself working and,
moreover
, collect money for your forthcoming education. When you
finally
decide to study in college or university, you’ll have
enough
cash to pay your studying fees.
I want to advise you to
buy
some
local newspapers. There are units with job advertisements.
But
first of all
, you need to
make
an appropriate CV. Don’t forget to note your communication abilities. I
think
, consultant in supermarket is
good
job position to
start
with.
Especially
, in electronic department. This is your field.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you about job finding and wish you
good
luck!
Your
sincerely
,
Givi
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