Dear Anna,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to enquire some details about the Certified Internal Auditor (CIA) courses at a leading college in London. As you live there, I am hoping you would be able to guide me in choosing the best college for the course.
As you know, I hail from a family where everyone is involved in the financial sector. Needless to say, I got my tertiary education from a business school, and at present, I am working as an Internal Auditor in a textile corporation, but I have been stuck with the same designation for more than 2 years. Therefore, in order to climb further up the corporate ladder, I would like to update my skills and knowledge, and the most plausible way to do that would be getting a foreign degree from a reputed college in the UK. Having spent a copious amount of hours researching the right institutions, I have narrowed down my options to just three colleges.
I would like to ask your assistance in getting in touch with those colleges. Perhaps you could dispatch me their customised brochures or prospectuses since due to the highly complex nature of these programs, the information in the public domain is hard to find about these courses.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Warm wishes,
Sameed
Dear Anna,
I hope this letter finds you in
good
health. I am writing to
enquire
some
details
about the Certified Internal Auditor (CIA) courses at a leading college in London. As you
live
there, I am hoping you would be able to guide me in choosing the best college for the course.
As you know, I hail from a family where everyone
is involved
in the financial sector. Needless to say, I
got
my tertiary education from a business school, and at present, I am working as an Internal Auditor in a textile corporation,
but
I have
been stuck
with the same designation for more than 2 years.
Therefore
, in order to climb
further
up the corporate ladder, I would like to update my
skills
and knowledge, and the most plausible way to do that would be getting a foreign degree from a reputed college in the UK. Having spent a copious amount of hours researching the right institutions, I have narrowed down my options to
just
three colleges.
I would like to ask your assistance in getting in touch with those colleges. Perhaps you could dispatch me their
customised
brochures or prospectuses since due to the
highly
complex nature of these programs, the information in the public domain is
hard
to find about these courses.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Warm wishes,
Sameed
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