Dear Aparna,
Hope you are doing great and enjoying your new job. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am planning to take a course at a college in your city. I am hoping your assistance in getting further information about the course.
As you know, I have been working as a software engineer for the last four years. So, I think this is the right time to work on one of my dreams - to acquire a management degree. I am planning to leave the job and apply for a part-time management course in Sydney. Though I have inquired online for a few of the colleges, could you please enlighten me with a few more details about the colleges, course duration, tuition fee regarding a management degree?
I am hoping you would guide me in finding the best college that offers a part-time management related course. I would be really grateful to you for your help.
Looking forward to getting your reply.
Warm wishes,
Naaz
Dear
Aparna
,
Hope you are doing great and enjoying your new job. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am planning to take a
course
at a college in your city. I am hoping your assistance in getting
further
information about the course.
As you know, I have been working as a software engineer for the last four years.
So
, I
think
this is the right time to work on one of my dreams
-
to acquire a
management
degree. I am planning to
leave
the job and apply for a part-time
management
course
in Sydney. Though I have inquired online for a few of the colleges, could you
please
enlighten me with a few more
details
about the colleges,
course
duration, tuition fee regarding a
management
degree?
I am hoping you would guide me in finding the best college that offers a part-time
management
related
course
. I would be
really
grateful to you for your
help
.
Looking forward to getting your reply.
Warm wishes,
Naaz
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