Dear Robert,
It seems like ages since we last met and time indeed flies. I am very sorry that I had not been in touch with you as frequently as I should have in the last few months. I had been terribly busy and could scarcely manage time for myself or for my family. I hope Samantha and Anna are doing great.
I have decided to enrol in a professional graphics designing course in Melbourne, Australia and I went through websites of different colleges in Melbourne. You are the best person I know to advise me on this. I prefer a college from your city because my uncle lives there with his family and being in the same city where you live in would be an advantage for me.
For the last three years, I have been working as a tech support member for a large IT company and as you know Math was my major in our school. I am quite confused about which college I should apply to and this is why I am turning to you for the advice. I would really appreciate your help regarding this. Also, can you find out what additional qualifications like an English language test score and so on are required to get admitted to such a college?
I hope you would not mind doing this for me and I would proceed according to your advice.
Take care and write me back when it is convenient for you.
Best regards,
Anthony
Dear Robert,
It seems like ages since we last met and time
indeed
flies. I am
very
sorry that I had not been in touch with you as
frequently
as I should have in the last few months. I had been
terribly
busy and could
scarcely
manage time for myself or for my family.
I
hope Samantha and Anna are doing great.
I
have decided to enrol in a professional graphics designing course in Melbourne, Australia and I went through websites of
different
colleges in Melbourne. You are the best person I know to advise me on this. I prefer a college from your city
because
my uncle
lives
there with his family and being in the same city where you
live
in would be an advantage for me.
For the last three years, I have been working as a tech support member for a large IT
company
and as you know Math was my major in our school. I am quite confused about which college I should apply to and this is why I am turning to you for the advice. I would
really
appreciate your
help
regarding this.
Also
, can you find out what additional qualifications like an English language
test
score and
so
on
are required
to
get
admitted to such a college?
I hope you would not mind doing this for me and I would proceed according to your advice.
Take care and write me back when it is convenient for you.
Best regards,
Anthony
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