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You had a meal at the local restaurant with your family. Write to a local newspaper to give the feedback. In your letter, you shoul saywhere the restaurant locatedwhat you had for a mealwhy do you recommend this restaurant to others. v.2

You had a meal at the local restaurant with your family. Write to a local newspaper to give the feedback. In your letter, you shoul saywhere the restaurant locatedwhat you had for a mealwhy do you recommend this restaurant to others. v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I writing in connection with my last visit to a new restaurant, which I would like to tell about. This place with a beautiful view is located in the city center close to the main public park and two underground stations. I consider the place extremely convenient. I had an excellent opportunity to celebrate my birthday party there. My family and I had pasta with tomatoes, potatoes with sugar and pizza for a meal. So, I must admit I had never tried such delicious dishes before. Also, the restaurant has an amazing playground for children inside. My children spent an interesting time there. As a parent, I consider this a very positive tendency. The event was very memorable for me so I would like to share my emotions with others and appreciate it if you could to publish my feedback about this place. This place is worthful to visit for everybody. I sincerely hope my request will not be ignored. Thank you kindly in advance. Yours faithfully, Sarah Brown
Dear Sir/Madam,

Did you mean "I'm writing", "I am writing", or "I was writing"?
I writing
in connection with my last visit to a new restaurant, which I would like to
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tell
about.

This
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place
with a
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beautiful
view
is located
in the city center close to the main public park and two underground stations. I consider the
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place
extremely
convenient. I had an excellent opportunity to celebrate my birthday party there. My family and I had pasta with tomatoes, potatoes with sugar and pizza for a meal.
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So
, I
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must
admit I had never tried such delicious dishes
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before
.
Also
, the restaurant has an amazing playground for children inside. My children spent an interesting time there. As a parent, I consider this a
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very
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positive
tendency. The
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event
was
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very
memorable for me
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so
I would like to share my emotions with others and appreciate it if you could to publish my feedback about this
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place
. This
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place
is
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worthful
to visit for everybody. I
sincerely
hope my request will not be
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ignored
.

Thank you kindly in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sarah Brown
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You had a meal at the local restaurant with your family. Write to a local newspaper to give the feedback. In your letter, you shoul saywhere the restaurant locatedwhat you had for a mealwhy do you recommend this restaurant to others. v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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