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You have received an important document that needs to be translated. Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate this important document for you. v.2

You have received an important document that needs to be translated. Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate this important document for you. v. 2
Hope you and your parents are doing excellent. I am sorry that I have not been in touch with you for the last couple of weeks. Even if I have not written to you for a while, you are always in my thoughts and prayer. I am writing to you today because I need your expertise to translate some important documents for me. You would be glad to know that my application has been accepted by the Wuhan University in China and if things go as planned, I will join the university next summer for my Master's degree. They have sent me some documents which are in the Chinese language and I need your help with that. You are the best person to assist me and this is really crucial for me to get admitted to this University. Without the proper translation of the documents, I will not be able to respond precisely to them. I am sending xerox copies of these documents, three documents with 7 pages in total, and would really appreciate if you can send them before 10th December. I could use Google Translate to interpret the texts but you know there are always glitches in this technology as some meanings are lost in translation! Your excellent skills in English and Chinese makes you the most suitable person to translate those documents for me. I owe you a big one. Take care and write me back whenever possible. Warm wishes, Kyle
Hope you and your parents are doing excellent. I am sorry that I have not been in touch with you for the last couple of weeks. Even if I have not written to you for a while, you are always in my thoughts and prayer. I am writing to you
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today
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because
I need your expertise to translate
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some
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important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
for me.

You would be glad to know that my application has been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
by the Wuhan University in China and if things go as planned, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the university
next
summer for my Master's degree. They have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
which are in the Chinese language and I need your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with that. You are the best person to assist me and this is
really
crucial for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
admitted to this University. Without the proper translation of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
, I will not be able to respond
precisely
to them.

I am sending xerox copies of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
, three
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
with 7 pages in total, and would
really
appreciate if you can
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send
them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
10th December. I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
Google Translate to interpret the texts
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
you know there are always glitches in this technology as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
meanings
are lost
in translation! Your excellent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in English and Chinese
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
you the most suitable person to translate those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
documents
for me. I owe you a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
one.

Take care and write me back whenever possible.

Warm wishes,

Kyle
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter You have received an important document that needs to be translated. Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate this important document for you. v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
243 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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