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The system of rubbish collection in your area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter- describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly- explain how thi v.2

The system of rubbish collection in your area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter- describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly- explain how thi v. 2
Dear Sir, I am a citizen of ' Sadbhav Residency' in Nikol area - a west zone of the city. I am writing this letter to make aware about the issue which is facing by all the members of my society. The municipality service regarding garbage collection is not maintaining properly in my area. The cleaners are not collecting the rubbish on specific time as well as they are not regular. Apart from this, the strength of the worker is very less as compare to the count of flats. Most of the residents are belonging to the private jobs, so they have to reach office on time. Because of irregular service they have wait till the arrival of rubbish collector van and clean the dustbin. If the cleaner come on proper time in the morning and collect the garbage then it would be very helpful for us. Moreover, the inspection on sweeper on regular basis improves the services provided by the municipality. Hoping for fastest action on the issue we are facing. Yours Faithfully, Kalpesh Sangani.
Dear Sir,

I am a citizen of '
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Sadbhav
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Residency&
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Nikol
area
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-
a west zone of the city. I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
aware about the issue which is facing by all the members of my society.

The municipality service regarding garbage collection is not maintaining
properly
in my area. The cleaners are not collecting the rubbish on specific time
as well
as they are not regular. Apart from this, the strength of the worker is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
less
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
compare to the count of flats. Most of the residents
The verb 'belonging' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are belonging
to the private jobs,
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so
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
reach office on time.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of irregular service they have wait till the arrival of rubbish collector van and clean the dustbin.

If the cleaner
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
on proper time in the morning and collect the garbage then it would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
helpful for us.
Moreover
, the inspection on sweeper on regular basis
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
the services provided by the municipality.

Hoping for fastest action on the issue we are facing.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Kalpesh
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Sangani
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2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter The system of rubbish collection in your area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter- describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly- explain how thi v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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