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The system of rubbish collection in your area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter- describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly- explain how thi v.2

The system of rubbish collection in your area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter- describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly- explain how thi v. 2

Dear Sir, I am a citizen of ' Sadbhav Residency' in Nikol area - a west zone of the city. I am writing this letter to make aware about the issue which is facing by all the members of my society. The municipality service regarding garbage collection is not maintaining properly in my area. The cleaners are not collecting the rubbish on specific time as well as they are not regular. Apart from this, the strength of the worker is very less as compare to the count of flats. Most of the residents are belonging to the private jobs, so they have to reach office on time. Because of irregular service they have wait till the arrival of rubbish collector van and clean the dustbin. If the cleaner come on proper time in the morning and collect the garbage then it would be very helpful for us. Moreover, the inspection on sweeper on regular basis improves the services provided by the municipality. Hoping for fastest action on the issue we are facing. Yours Faithfully, Kalpesh Sangani.

Dear Sir,

I am a citizen of &#039; Possible spelling mistake found.SaddamSambaSashaSadatSandbarSadhus
Sadbhav
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#039; in Possible spelling mistake found.NikonNikola
Nikol
 area Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 a west zone of the city. I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 aware about the issue which is facing by all the members of my society.

The municipality service regarding garbage collection is not maintaining properly
 in my area. The cleaners are not collecting the rubbish on specific time as well
 as they are not regular. Apart from this, the strength of the worker is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 less Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 compare to the count of flats. Most of the residents The verb 'belonging' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are belonging
 to the private jobs, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 reach office on time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of irregular service they have wait till the arrival of rubbish collector van and clean the dustbin.

If the cleaner This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 on proper time in the morning and collect the garbage then it would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 helpful for us. Moreover
, the inspection on sweeper on regular basis This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorates
improves
 the services provided by the municipality.

Hoping for fastest action on the issue we are facing.

Yours Faithfully
,

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Kalpesh
Possible spelling mistake found.SantanaSaganKisanganiSingeing
Sangani
. 

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter The system of rubbish collection in your area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to local council. In your letter- describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly- explain how thi v. 2

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

176 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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