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You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v.8

You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v. 8

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to thank you for a fantastic and memorable evening for me and my friends at your restaurant. I would love to see you continue offering such appreciating dining experience to your guests and wish remarkable success to your business. As you know, last week I celebrated my 27th birthday with my friends at your restaurant which turned out to be a great success. Everyone enjoyed the arrangement at the poolside and the decoration of sparkling lights with soft and soothing background music. Coming to the food, the presentation was as mouthwatering as the food itself. The service was fabulous too. I am very satisfied with your hospitality. However, I have a suggestion to make. A few friends of mine attended my birthday party with their children. So if you could have added some interesting games for them that would have made the party more interesting. I believe it would be very convenient for other people with children. I once again thank you for your admirable service. Yours faithfully, Mansoor Afzal

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to thank you for a fantastic and memorable evening for me and my friends at your restaurant. I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you continue offering such appreciating dining experience to your guests and wish remarkable success to your business.

As you know, last week I celebrated my 27th birthday with my friends at your restaurant which turned out to be a great success. Everyone enjoyed the arrangement at the poolside and the decoration of sparkling lights with soft and soothing background music. Coming to the food, the presentation was as mouthwatering as the food itself. The service was fabulous too.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 satisfied with your hospitality. However
, I have a suggestion to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
. A few friends of mine attended my birthday party with their children. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 if you could have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 interesting games for them that would have made the party more interesting. I believe it would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 convenient for other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with children.

I once again thank you for your admirable service.

Yours faithfully
,

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Mansoor
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Afzal

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v. 8

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

176 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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