You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v.8
You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v. 8
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to thank you for a fantastic and memorable evening for me and my friends at your restaurant. I would love to see you continue offering such appreciating dining experience to your guests and wish remarkable success to your business.
As you know, last week I celebrated my 27th birthday with my friends at your restaurant which turned out to be a great success. Everyone enjoyed the arrangement at the poolside and the decoration of sparkling lights with soft and soothing background music. Coming to the food, the presentation was as mouthwatering as the food itself. The service was fabulous too.
I am very satisfied with your hospitality. However, I have a suggestion to make. A few friends of mine attended my birthday party with their children. So if you could have added some interesting games for them that would have made the party more interesting. I believe it would be very convenient for other people with children.
I once again thank you for your admirable service.
Yours faithfully,
Mansoor Afzal
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to thank you for a fantastic and memorable evening for me and my friends at your restaurant. I would
love
to
see
you continue offering such appreciating dining experience to your guests and wish remarkable success to your business.
As you know, last week I celebrated my 27th birthday with my friends at your restaurant which turned out to be a great success. Everyone enjoyed the arrangement at the poolside and the decoration of sparkling lights with soft and soothing background music. Coming to the food, the presentation was as mouthwatering as the food itself. The service was fabulous too.
I am
very
satisfied with your hospitality.
However
, I have a suggestion to
make
. A few friends of mine attended my birthday party with their children.
So
if you could have
added
some
interesting games for them that would have made the party more interesting. I believe it would be
very
convenient for other
people
with children.
I once again thank you for your admirable service.
Yours
faithfully
,
Mansoor
Afzal
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