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You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v.10

You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v. 10
Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently celebrated my birthday at your restaurant with my friends and that was a grand party. I am writing this letter to thank you for making it a successful and memorable event. My friends and I thoroughly enjoyed the food at your restaurant. The birthday bake was delicious and everyone liked it. Your culinary staff cooked delicious food and inveigled everyone’s taste. The superb menu was provided at a reasonable price. Moreover, the staff was polite and keen to look after our requirements. The service offered was intriguing and beyond our expectation. To add more, the restaurant depicts the mother nature’s beauty with glistening greenery all around. The soothing and pleasant atmosphere made the event unique and engaging. However, some improvements would make your restaurant more appealing, I suppose. Firstly, more staff members are essential to serving all the guests. Furthermore, it would be great if you could include a wide variety of foreign cuisines on your menu. I trust you would accept my suggestions. I look forward to seeing the improvements in the restaurant. Once again thank you for a praiseworthy service. Yours faithfully, Vishwa Vinutna
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently celebrated my birthday at your
restaurant
with my friends and that was a grand party. I am writing this letter to thank you for making it a successful and memorable
event
.

My friends and I
thoroughly
enjoyed the food at your
restaurant
. The birthday bake was delicious and everyone liked it. Your culinary staff cooked delicious food and inveigled everyone’s taste. The superb menu
was provided
at a reasonable price.

Moreover
, the staff was polite and keen to look after our requirements. The service offered was intriguing and beyond our expectation. To
add
more, the
restaurant
depicts the mother nature’s beauty with glistening greenery all around. The soothing and pleasant atmosphere made the
event
unique and engaging.

However
,
some
improvements would
make
your
restaurant
more appealing, I suppose.
Firstly
, more staff members are essential to serving all the guests.
Furthermore
, it would be great if you could include a wide variety of foreign cuisines on your menu.

I trust you would accept my suggestions. I look forward to seeing the improvements in the
restaurant
. Once again thank you for a praiseworthy service.

Yours
faithfully
,

Vishwa
Vinutna
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. v. 10

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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