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You borrow some books from your school or college library. unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative Nd cannot returns the books in time. wrute a letter to library what has happened and tell what you want to do about it v.2

You borrow some books from your school or college library. unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative Nd cannot returns the books in time. wrute a letter to library what has happened and tell what you want to do about it v. 2
Respected Sir I am xyz student of commerce department of you college. i am writing this letter to feel apology for the book I have taken from department library. Last week, a book on basis of commerce I borrowed from library. as per the rules of library, book has to be returned or renew within 5days. but due to my relative illness I have to go home urgently as there is need of two persons. and she is also one of my close friend. unfortunately I forgot to told roommate to return the book. So, on the behalf of this. I request you to please extend the date of return by two weeks because I have to make some notes from the book. As soon as i returned from there and after completing the notes I return it to library. I am willing to pay the fine as involved. I am looking forward response from your side. Yours faithfully XyZ
Respected Sir

I am
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student of commerce department of you college.
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i
am writing this letter to feel apology for the
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book
I have taken from department library.

Last week, a
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book
on basis of commerce I borrowed from library.
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as
per the
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rules
of library,
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book
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has to
be returned
or renew within 5days.
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but
due to my relative illness I
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have to
go home
urgently
as there
is need
of two persons.
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and
she is
also
one of my close friend.
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unfortunately
I forgot to
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told
roommate to return the book.

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So
, on the behalf of this. I request you to
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please
extend the date of return by two weeks
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because
I
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have to
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make
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some
notes from the
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book
. As
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soon
as
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i
returned from there and after completing the notes I return it to library. I am willing to pay the fine as involved.

I am looking forward response from your side. Yours
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faithfully


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IELTS letter You borrow some books from your school or college library. unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative Nd cannot returns the books in time. wrute a letter to library what has happened and tell what you want to do about it v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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