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Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new home. You have time to help her? How can you help her move? Ask questions about new home v.2

Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new home. You have time to help her? How can you help her move? Ask questions about new home v. 2
Dear Alex, How are you? I am guaranteed that you are excited to move to your new home. Also, I can understand your anxiety about leaving everything behind and switching to a new place. But don' t worry I would be there with you to give a hand. As you know, this weekend my parents will go to my native place for a family function. Therefore, I am available to help you with all the chores right from packaging all your belongings from the old house to set everything to a new place. I have seen an informative video about effective ways of packing. It succinctly explains the ways to pack the stuff along with categorizing them, so that it would be easy to unpack it as per necessity. Therefore, by following those tips I could help you in packaging. Nevertheless, we would need some help with transportation. By the way, does your home have a garden? Considering your affection for flowers and bushes I was thinking of gifting you a beautiful, albeit a small rose-bush. I would come to your place on Saturday at or around 9 AM. Call me if there are any changes to the plan. Love, Pallavi
Dear Alex,

How are you? I
am guaranteed
that you
are excited
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to your new home.
Also
, I can understand your anxiety about leaving everything behind and switching to a new place.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
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don&
#039; t worry I would be there with you to give a hand.

As you know, this weekend my parents will go to my native place for a family function.
Therefore
, I am available to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with all the chores right from packaging all your belongings from the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
to set everything to a new place.

I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
an informative video about effective ways of packing. It
succinctly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explains
the ways to pack the stuff along with categorizing them,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it would be easy to unpack it as per necessity.
Therefore
, by following those tips I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you in packaging.
Nevertheless
, we would need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with transportation.

By the way, does your home have a garden? Considering your affection for flowers and bushes I was thinking of gifting you a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
, albeit a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
rose-bush.

I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to your place on Saturday at or around 9 AM. Call me if there are any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
to the plan.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

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Pallavi
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new home. You have time to help her? How can you help her move? Ask questions about new home v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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